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Scene 6- Rabbit

He stretched his head, Out of the muddy hole; To take a peek, At the sodden ground, And the water-dripping grasses. His tiny little head- A ball of fur it seemed, Had a pair of lovely little eyes, Which shined in the sunlight- Like a star far above. His suddenly happy eyes, Showed satisfaction; And there he leaped out, Into the soft mattress-like meadow, And jumped hither and thither. 'CUT!',there came a sound, And there emerged a director, And there emerged a trainer, His hand held a white string, To which the rabbit`s neck was tied!

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Date: 4/26/2015 3:21:00 PM
:) I enjoyed the poem the WAR
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Date: 5/6/2015 2:56:00 AM
thanks
Date: 4/26/2015 3:08:00 PM
Suze, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 5/6/2015 3:14:00 AM
thanks
Date: 4/15/2015 6:44:00 PM
SUZE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/19/2015 8:19:00 AM
thx i think u r really nice. i`d be really glad 2 be ur frnd hello frnd.........
Date: 4/12/2015 7:13:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup,Suze :) - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us - A great poem - I wish you a nice Sunday - Hope you can find some poems that you like at my place :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/14/2015 11:46:00 PM
thanks 4 the remarks.
Date: 4/11/2015 3:02:00 PM
Suze, about your poem: Don't know if I like seeing a rabbit neck tied. I love the write. Different, and descriptive... Love the first half the most... have a nice day.. LINDA
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Date: 4/14/2015 10:27:00 AM
thx 4 commenting.it means so much to me thank u. can u comment on my poem -the war
Date: 4/11/2015 3:00:00 PM
Hello Suze, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/11/2015 8:05:00 AM
feel free to comment on my poem
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