Scattered Leaves

I pleaded the wind;
To stop scattering the leaves
They said they were tired of being lost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Clason Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Really like this. Such great imagery and a truly great haiku.
Boddie Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Beauty in its simplest form....that's why these words will forever be adorn....;)
Nunez Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 9:20 AM
:-) A modern haiku. Lovely image you gave us. PS. So haiku may exceed 17 syllables ?
Muideen Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 3:08 PM
interesting piece, it intrigue............A.M.
Tadros Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Thank you so much :)
Vaso Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 1:08 AM
excellent!
Tadros Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 5:56 AM
Thanks :)
Comporozos Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Top quality image! Bravo
Tadros Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 2:44 PM
Thank you so much :)
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