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Scattered All Around

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" John Ruskin, 1853 Scattered all around Scrambling to pick up the pieces Of what is left That was once whole Now shattered on the ground What once was beautiful Now broken and chipped away Desperate to find every piece In hopes of restoration Frantically searching Eyes darting everywhere Ignoring the pain As the shards cut As you seize each piece Even the most minuscule Clutching it ever so close As tears start to swell Chest begins to heave As panic sets in How could this have happened Failed to protect and guard Something so precious Only few ever find More valuable than gold Casting the illusion Of being untouchable Standing the test of time Safe and resistant Thus leading to distance Less guarding and sheltering Taking comfort in the safety Of letting go Only to see it topple over Like slow motion Fearfully reaching out Brushing fingertips But not quick enough Watching it descend Eyes wide No longer breathing Heart stopping Helpless now Ear-piercing As it shatters Into a million pieces Knees hitting the ground Awe struck Dumb-founded What once was treasured Lies hopeless and lifeless Even if all the pieces are found Carefully glued back together It will never be as beautiful Covered with cracks Never showing strength Only fragile and weak Telling the story of carelessness How one looked away Only for a brief moment Left vulnerable to the unknown Is now nothing more Than broken shards Glistening from tears In blood-stained hands By Shauna Riley 5/17/11 For A Rambling Poet's contest, "All the Little Pieces"

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Date: 6/27/2011 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Shauna. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 12:32:00 AM
The depths of emotions conveyed in this rendering, Shauna. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:48:00 PM
so happy this placed really well, shauna... cheers and more! ") huggs
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:41:00 PM
Very powerful emoting. Great way to do this challenge, Shauna. How badly things can go in just one careless moment. wow. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:47:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!! This poem hit me at work and I think this really describes well how I feel...to really describe what it's like to be in such a position...Thanks again for the great compliment :)
Date: 6/24/2011 6:13:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, RRR
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:55:00 PM
Congrats to you on your fine poem and win...Michael
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:31:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful winning poem in the contest ..an elegant write of creative poetry and poetic art.. enjoy with luv.. Shauna..
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Date: 6/24/2011 4:02:00 PM
Thanks! I think this does a great job and justice to how I feel...
Date: 5/19/2011 11:48:00 PM
oi! i laughed at some clever lines... and its all interesting... has all likds of deep thoughts... i think i will add this to my favorites... it has so much i can think on... and explore... thanks for sharing,,Linda
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Date: 6/24/2011 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Linda...funny I wrote this in May...and still feel this way...
Date: 5/18/2011 9:11:00 PM
Glass! Bloody hands! Shattering helplessness! All the lovely subjects fueling the works! ~JSLambert ...even if you STOP writing here...Do Not STOP writing Dear!Time, thoughts, reason, sanity, emotion, ALL slip into the Fog of our minds when we put down the pen. Use your words of expression. Heal. ~JSLambert
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Date: 5/31/2011 11:34:00 AM
Thanks for the words of encouragement :)
Date: 5/18/2011 4:39:00 AM
A very fine allegorical write! When love or life goes badly wrong, it can feel very much like this! Some good, strong imagery here. Well written indeed! Regards, Robert.
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