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Siblings scatter here and yon, All that one-time nearness gone, Though many did feel put-upon; Still, closeness might endure. They choose to live in different states With different life styles on their plates Which sometimes lead to strange debates, Their reasons quite obscure. In childhood, though, with parents ‘round, They shared a home on common ground And hopefully, they often found Some ways to get along. Yet as they grew, they made their way And often knew they couldn’t stay, No longer in the family sway, The urge for parting strong. The bond, for some, despite the miles And lives that follow different styles Stays strong enough for sharing smiles And sorrows they’ve amassed Because the homes they once had shared, If lucky, left them well-prepared To keep their ties to those who cared From way back in the past.

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Date: 3/13/2023 1:41:00 PM
Ideally, if no one had to work for a living, we’d have time to just hang around. Let’s not forget to be grateful for the gift of phones and videos etc.
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Date: 3/12/2023 9:25:00 PM
Bittersweet for me. Sure wish my family hadn't spread over three continents!!!
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Date: 3/12/2023 7:36:00 AM
Wonderful
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Date: 3/11/2023 6:54:00 PM
keeping ties is essential, for a family, a touching poem, i know that very well yann
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Date: 3/11/2023 5:33:00 PM
Crazy isn't it? You raise them to be independent and they take it literally. lol In the end, there's nothing like family:) Love the rhyme scheme on this one too, Ilene.
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Date: 3/11/2023 4:43:00 PM
Yup they take the examples their parents gave them and spread it far and wide. A very true poem .
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Date: 3/11/2023 4:43:00 PM
Nice tail-rhyme, Ilene, very well done!
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