Scars Left Behind

The Sacrifical Child

Llandudno Wales 980 BC-1846, Sierra Leone, Congo,
Niger, Peru, India, Pakistan, Russia, China & Philippines 2013

Chapped, scabbed skin, dirt encrusted, blue-pallid in the moonlight;
the stars still glow radiant light when they rise, a wolf howls midnight.
Insects stir on scratched skin in tangled hair massed
naked, as born, they rise; the bore hole calls, days task.

Cracked like a seagulls eggs, the cave opening call.
The gold-red-green copper, a metal's worth it all,
child moles, mother moles, dwarfs small, crawl;
between the narrow crevasse in the knocker's wall.

The entry three hand spans wide, a mere two foot tall;
oil burns in claywells, soot coats on dirty faces, as they crawl,
through rankness they squirm, their hands on bone awls;
naked children, and women mine in these places, these hell falls, 

for raw metals to make the weapons of man.

In before dawn, baskets full, haul........
out at dusk, human moles get no sun at all....
others melt the metal, make, and maul,

The warriors claim its for our defense
yet hunger gnaws, this makes no sense….

Grease fills the air beyond despair
stench fills each heinous vein;
contorted forms, of those small, helpless, born
fill in the shunts with continual pain.

From the dawn of time, this drama still plays,
more than one hundred and fifty eight million children; slaves today.
Women and children sacrificed so men can get paid.

Poet: Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/26/2012 2:38:00 PM
Wow! This is exceptionally well written poetry. I simply love its originality. Very well done
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:16:00 PM
It is a stench on civilization to have these things going on. And I think you should enter it in your contest - you would probably win!!!:) Soup mail in a minute.
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Date: 7/15/2012 2:42:00 PM
WOOw Debbie, this is so true and very good written. Open yours eyes...and see the pain,hunger and the cruel world. - Wish you luck in contest, hope for a win. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/15/2012 12:52:00 PM
a powerful statement and i absolu agree with every word....this is a poem with a message worth reading...it ought to be a compulsory item on school literature courses.....wel l written Debs !
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Date: 7/15/2012 9:54:00 AM
It's a well written piece, and yes, the world is cruel, so cruel. I like to think unworldly, for my home is not here! You are the last comment I will be posting. Double minded people on this site with their erotic writing sickens me. Keep your pen flowing and know that with the faith of a mustard seed, you can tell that mountain to move and it will move! Cindy
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Date: 7/15/2012 7:29:00 AM
Wow! This is an excellent piece, Debbie! So powerful, yet a stark reminder of the inhumanity in this world. Love, Kim
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Date: 7/14/2012 8:01:00 PM
‡ We War Not With Flesh & Blood; Smile, Perspectives & Points Of View.... Luv, Rachel ‡
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