Scars

SCARS

Sketched upon the weary landscape
Scuff marks of the cross
Deep and wide

The impressions of a timely death
Tears that flowed from earthborn breast
Pressed upon our Edenic chest

12/6/2017

christianfree verse

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

December 7, 2017 at 6:38 AM

Beautiful scars indeed! Such a soul-stirring poem, Kim. Your poetic expressions shine, as always. To view the cross in the lens of your words is new and exciting. Poetry fresh creative write. Aurora bright poem. Love and smiles always.

Kim Rodrigues

December 7, 2017 at 7:50 AM

Sometimes I think of these ideas on my way or sitting in church! That’s what the bulletin/note page is for, right? Scribbling poetic ideas. ;)