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Scars

SCARS Sketched upon the weary landscape Scuff marks of the cross Deep and wide The impressions of a timely death Tears that flowed from earthborn breast Pressed upon our Edenic chest 12/6/2017

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Date: 12/7/2017 6:38:00 AM
Beautiful scars indeed! Such a soul-stirring poem, Kim. Your poetic expressions shine, as always. To view the cross in the lens of your words is new and exciting. Poetry fresh creative write. Aurora bright poem. Love and smiles always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2017 7:50:00 AM
Sometimes I think of these ideas on my way or sitting in church! That’s what the bulletin/note page is for, right? Scribbling poetic ideas. ;)
Date: 12/7/2017 2:48:00 AM
Scars, the statements of life...Well expressed...deep...All the best Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2017 6:22:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo!
Date: 12/6/2017 7:34:00 PM
Beautiful thought provoking write Kim!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2017 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, Che! :)

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