Scars

Do you remember when we ended up at that scrapyard?
(Running some errand for your mother or mine)
The cars were lined up 
Bonnets crushed
Windows smashed
Seat stuffing gathering in foot wells
And you slid your fingers between my own and squeezed
Bone against bone.

You said you never felt so alone.

I saw metal
You saw flesh
I saw half empty boots
And you saw half fulfilled potential
I saw families just trying to get by
Swapping crumpled aluminium for crisp clean notes

You saw us.

Wasted on gravel
Stripped of names and memories
Left only as scarred shells
That would soon be melted down
And forgotten

That night we made love in your car
Let hips press against hips
Let hips press against steering wheel
Your fingers grasped at torn interior 
And we moved to the rhythm of a radio 
That couldn’t quite find its station
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Roberts Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 5:55 PM
Congratulations Gracie ....Seren
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January 13, 2013 at 7:55 PM
Congrats! ~SKAT
A   Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 6:27 PM
Gracie, . ;-) Congratulations with your lovely poem. In Mystic Rose' "Be My Valentine" contest. Always~ PD
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 2:49 PM
One great unique bit of Free Verse here a number 1 for me! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A   Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Gracie, wow...what an image...pd
Palmer Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 3:52 PM
romantic write Gracie ,junk yard love lol,
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