Scars

The bright sun has set and the cover of darkness cannot hide my scars.

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Milton Toran

Date: 1/15/2010 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured writing.---Milt

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 1/14/2010 12:30:00 AM

Some scars are permanent some disappear when the sun rises...beautiful Sentyu, Raul. Congratulations on being featured this week. All the best, Iolanda

Daver Austin

Date: 1/12/2010 6:11:00 AM

Very effective. Congrats on the selection and the form. Love, daver

James Fraser

Date: 1/11/2010 1:41:00 PM

Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Raul >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2010 4:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Raul. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 1/11/2010 1:45:00 AM

VERY PRODOUND SENRYU, RAUL. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FEATURE OF THE WEEK, AND THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR POETIC TALENT ONCE AGAIN. LOVE, LAINIE

Brian Strand

Date: 1/11/2010 12:00:00 AM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Raul.Rgds Brian

Jo Bien

Date: 1/10/2010 6:06:00 PM

phenomenal! JB

P Sheart

Date: 1/10/2010 4:01:00 PM

Hi Raul,Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty

Date: 1/10/2010 1:35:00 PM

So much depth for just three lines. I think many will relate to the message. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/10/2010 1:10:00 PM

This is a deep and powerful senyru!! Excellent! Congratulations on this one being featured, Raul! ~ Love, Carrie

Janette Fisher

Date: 1/10/2010 12:01:00 PM

Raul - wonderful as always - I admire your work immensely. Many regards Janette