Scars

The bright sun has set
and the cover of darkness
cannot hide my scars.

lifenaturesenryu

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Milton Toran

January 15, 2010 at 8:21 AM

Congratulations on your featured writing.---Milt

Iolanda Scripca

January 14, 2010 at 12:30 AM

Some scars are permanent some disappear when the sun rises...beautiful Sentyu, Raul. Congratulations on being featured this week. All the best, Iolanda

Daver Austin

January 12, 2010 at 6:11 AM

Very effective. Congrats on the selection and the form. Love, daver

James Fraser

January 11, 2010 at 1:41 PM

Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Raul >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 11, 2010 at 4:42 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Raul. Love, Carol

Elaine George

January 11, 2010 at 1:45 AM

VERY PRODOUND SENRYU, RAUL. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FEATURE OF THE WEEK, AND THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR POETIC TALENT ONCE AGAIN. LOVE, LAINIE

Brian Strand

January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Raul.Rgds Brian

Jo Bien

January 10, 2010 at 6:06 PM

phenomenal! JB

P Sheart

January 10, 2010 at 4:01 PM

Hi Raul,Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty

January 10, 2010 at 1:35 PM

So much depth for just three lines. I think many will relate to the message. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen