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Scarred Soul Impressions

The window to my soul's barred ~ I had left it open once, but you did not tread lightly, you stepped all over my heart and crushed my belief in love; my tears made me stronger, strong enough to bar it again ~ now all that is left are scars. 10.20.2020
Visual 2 For Nette Onclaud's "Impressions" contest

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Date: 11/23/2020 10:51:00 AM
Hello Jo Daniel, you are too good for him. Yes now deal with the scars. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 10/27/2020 8:44:00 AM
Very touching write Jo, sad that some broken hearts don't heal!
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Date: 10/26/2020 5:30:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... baring your through your poetic style your heart, which I believe is unbarred by God's great, gracious, generous love. God bless you.
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Date: 10/25/2020 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement :-)
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Date: 10/21/2020 4:50:00 AM
Leaves a ache in my own heart, beating with grief for the loss I feel after reading your moving and powerful work here. God bless you with many more my friend and wishing you love again
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/21/2020 4:50:00 AM
A fave :)
Date: 10/20/2020 8:30:00 AM
That is so heart breaking a poem. Pity the scars are not easy to heal. ~~
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Date: 10/20/2020 6:16:00 AM
Apt impression from that image--the window to my soul is barred--well said!
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Date: 10/20/2020 5:23:00 AM
Very sad and sadly some people do this.. Emotive piece for this contest..
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