Joanna Daniel Poet Verse

Scarred Soul Impressions

The window to my soul's barred ~
I had left it open once,
but you did not tread lightly,
you stepped all over my heart 
and crushed my belief in love;
my tears made me stronger, strong 
enough to bar it again ~
now all that is left are scars.



10.20.2020

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For Nette Onclaud's "Impressions" contest

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Darlene De Beaulieu November 23, 2020 at 10:51 AM Hello Jo Daniel, you are too good for him. Yes now deal with the scars. enjoy your day my friend.

John Hamilton October 27, 2020 at 8:44 AM Very touching write Jo, sad that some broken hearts don't heal!

Beata Agustin October 26, 2020 at 5:30 AM Thanks for sharing this... baring your through your poetic style your heart, which I believe is unbarred by God's great, gracious, generous love. God bless you.

Jo Chamberlain October 25, 2020 at 6:40 AM Congratulations on your placement :-)

Regina Mcintosh October 21, 2020 at 4:50 AM Leaves a ache in my own heart, beating with grief for the loss I feel after reading your moving and powerful work here. God bless you with many more my friend and wishing you love again Regina Mcintosh October 21, 2020 at 4:50 AM A fave :)

Victor Buhagiar October 20, 2020 at 8:30 AM That is so heart breaking a poem. Pity the scars are not easy to heal. ~~

Vijay Pandit October 20, 2020 at 6:16 AM Apt impression from that image--the window to my soul is barred--well said!

Silent One October 20, 2020 at 5:23 AM Very sad and sadly some people do this.. Emotive piece for this contest..