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Scarlet Thread

See the scarlet thread running true through our beings unseen from that resplendent moment our eyes set on each other. A color portrait of our hearts forever aching candle's glow dances touching your skin in silent valley of eternal mist where in moonlight, stars shine through. I've no paradise nor rainbows in the night, heartbeats felt without a sound in a haze of loneliness, when our love bled onto the ground we felt the pain of our passion's spell, Yet, your heart beats at the tandem of mine as it's torn asunder for all times, I walk across the room with candle's glow scents of patchouli, musk and roses permeating our closeness. I know you'll pull me closer to fuse our flesh as one passion will touch us at the break of night and seduce our souls 'til the break of light. Subterfuge of lust, rapid heart beats yearning tastes of love in time and space; Then we'll slip into nothingness in a vast universe where our love collides with endless feelings held inside. Pain inside blows open while passions' spells take over explosive crescendo of more. We can never rid ourselves of this for the scarlet thread runs through the cloth of our being it burns in us, deep inside our souls. ...and the hematite pendulum sways side to side.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/8/2024 6:55:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/16/2017 5:09:00 PM
Miss Mistress This is one of your best. In fact, back in 2015 this writes much different than some of your contempory work I have seen in other high places, for you are more famous than we. Powerful journey of love and lust. "Subterfuge" is a word I use often----good one. Congrats, Thomas ?
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Date: 3/22/2016 12:17:00 PM
Such a beautiful piece Tanya, such good imagery filled with emotions, a blessing to read indeed!
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Date: 1/30/2016 5:46:00 PM
TANYA, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Always & Forever! LINDA
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:55:00 AM
What an amazing work you've done Tanya! This deserves a thousand views!
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Date: 7/19/2015 9:36:00 AM
Tanya, A most compelling and sensitive write here indeed. The message, the imagery, and the passion are all quite palpable. (I wouldn't ever worry about the length of your poem: short, medium, long, or even epic narrative. The most important things (my opinion) are getting your message across to the reader, the depth of your theme, and the high quality of your write from start to finish.) You're doing great and I thoroughly enjoyed your poem here. A "7"!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 7/15/2015 9:11:00 AM
Your scarlet thread runs through this piece wonderfully. A lovely sensual ride.
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Date: 7/13/2015 12:49:00 AM
TANYA, Congratulations on having your poem featured this coming week. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/13/2015 12:18:00 PM
Tanya, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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