Scarlet Sunset

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brilliant brushstrokes of a masterly mind golden glimmers of a scarlet sunset emerge glinting glorious gossamer glow viewing vermillion twilight poignant portrait etch enchanting serene solitude peaceful Palms spark tender tranquility opalescent ocean inspires bliss. December 15, 2021 "Alliterisen 2" Poetry Contest PICTURE: 3 Syllable Sequence: E (10-12-9-11-8-10-10): checked by Howmany syllables.com Sponsor: Joseph May

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Valsa George

Date: 12/26/2021 8:44:00 PM

Lovely scene painted in lovely shades.. Brilliant Malabika !

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/21/2021 5:25:00 AM

Such very beautiful imagery you created dear Mala... in this poem of yours... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/21/2021 5:58:00 AM

Thank you, Anitha. Really appreciate your lovely comment.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/19/2021 12:47:00 PM

This beauty expresses God’s majesty so magnificently it is bound to be a top winner Mala. You outdid yourself! Your vivid imagery in descriptive colors eludes to the Ekphrasis form as well as the Alliterisen form. Outstanding! Mele Kalikimaka my friend. Blessings xxoo

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/19/2021 1:50:00 PM

Connie, your comment is so amazing - blows me away! You are right - I can categorize this in Ekphrasis form - thank you so much for mentioning - I didn’t think of that before! Love and hugs, Dear Friend!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/15/2021 3:05:00 PM

This is gorgeous. I love it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/19/2021 1:48:00 PM

Thanks, Gina. Appreciate your kind comment.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/15/2021 2:41:00 PM

Oh wow, Malabika...this is simply beautiful. The picture does not do your words justice; but it does present a gorgeous image of the sunset. Thanks for sharing.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/15/2021 2:49:00 PM

Thanks, Milton. Your comment is appreciated.