scarlet sunrise

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For Tania Kitchin's Sunrise or Sunset Haiku with a color Poetry Contest

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in dawn’s solitude
scarlet rays strip night away . . .
bleeding heart buds bloom

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Valsa George

Date: 8/21/2025 2:18:00 AM

Well written Andrea. In our place we have another flower that we call bleeding heart. It is a heart shaped small white flower with a red pistil and pollens hanging down.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/20/2025 2:58:00 AM

Well crafted, Andrea, with subtle coloring in the last line. Enjoyed your great haiku

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 8/19/2025 7:00:00 PM

Beautiful Wish you the best

Paige Hind

Date: 8/19/2025 5:21:00 PM

Gorgeous, love that "scarlet rays strip night away"

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/19/2025 3:20:00 PM

Very visual. A fine write. Great for arthritis pain, the sun -- my bathing experience. Guess I get a little red also.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2025 1:31:00 PM

I like this one very much. Reads like a good contender for a contest to me. Way to go. I like the bleeding-heart flower/plant, but we have tried to have one for the second time with no luck. Sara K

John Lawless

Date: 8/19/2025 12:03:00 PM

Nicely done Andrea, several nuances in the final line....as it should be in Haiku

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2025 10:27:00 AM

- Lovely written, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs