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You grieve for Autumn, watching Her leaves die, and as emotional tears build, you cry. For Fall becomes the harbinger of death, watching Her leaves die; you grieve for Autumn. Autumn drapes the land like a scarlet shroud for sensing the cold approach; Summer cowed. And acquiescing to Winter's command, like a scarlet shroud, Autumn drapes the land. You feel a chill creeping into your bones as the wind moans with ghostly overtones. And treading on remains of Autumn's kill, creeping into your bones, you feel a chill. When Winter arrives; snow softens the stage for a vibrant Lady, not one of rage. And guaranteeing that Nature survives, snow softens the stage when Winter arrives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/22/2018 4:11:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your top win, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/23/2018 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/13/2018 8:06:00 PM
This beauty is a marvel Emile! This form is not an easy one. Reversed lines written not to sound forced is not an easy task. You have managed this brilliantly my friend. I love the bittersweet imagery of autumn "acquiescing to Winter's command". Just marvelous! : ) xxoo
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Date: 11/13/2018 9:24:00 PM
Thanks Connie, I base in the glow of your praise my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/13/2018 1:29:00 PM
Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/13/2018 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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