Probir Gupta Poet Rhyme

Scarlet Poetry

You are the crimson surge
I am your crimson desire 
The bird radiates a crimson urge
Comes about the sapphire

You vivify the respirations 
I deeply breathe your mist
Following the crimson inhalations
Comes about the crimson twist

Thank God that I got the life
And enjoy the crimson strife
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July 26, 2016

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 8, 2016 at 6:54 AM Beautiful poem, Probir. Gorgeous symmetry of thought and desire, of self-awareness to freely yield to love and the consequences thereof. Very poignant read. My first one of you impressive catalog of poems. I will now start to chip away at the wealth of knowledge you so gracious have freely given us. Ty also for reading my poem. Much love and peace to you, sir. Probir Gupta October 9, 2016 at 12:03 AM Thank you ... I will certainly read ...

Yolanda Scott July 31, 2016 at 2:35 PM Nice write. I like and enjoyed it!! Good luck. Probir Gupta August 1, 2016 at 12:21 AM Thank you ...

Wendy Rycroft July 28, 2016 at 7:03 AM Well written good luck for the contest x Probir Gupta July 28, 2016 at 10:47 AM Thank you ...

Lewis Raynes July 27, 2016 at 12:04 AM good write Probir, good luck in the contest. Probir Gupta July 27, 2016 at 5:43 AM Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2016 at 2:45 PM - Really wonderful written, Probir - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Probir Gupta July 26, 2016 at 7:48 PM Thank you ...

Madhupriya Shanmugam July 26, 2016 at 12:53 PM Wat a thought:)good luck Probir Gupta July 26, 2016 at 7:54 PM We are as we think ... thank you so much ...

Janis Medders Tobechi July 26, 2016 at 12:25 PM You captured the red.....Good luck in the contest. Probir Gupta July 26, 2016 at 7:56 PM Thank you Janis ..

Kelli White July 26, 2016 at 10:30 AM Red passion, love desire so much to life. Probir Gupta July 26, 2016 at 11:55 AM Yes ... in poetry ... sometimes in life too of course .... thank you ....

Julia Ho July 26, 2016 at 7:26 AM A very lovely poem, though I've noticed quite a number of poems that use the rhyme of "life" and "strife" together. Probir Gupta July 26, 2016 at 9:04 AM Thank you ... rhyming life with strife is very common ....

Ronald Kent July 26, 2016 at 5:27 AM Enjoyed the write very much, good luck in the contest. Probir Gupta July 26, 2016 at 9:06 AM Thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis July 26, 2016 at 3:06 AM Ah how delightfully... crimson my friend Probir! A seven. Probir Gupta July 26, 2016 at 4:52 AM Thank you ... Regards ...