Scarlet Horse

A grain of rice,
seeds of a vegetable,
lights in a decoration,
a bride.
A bottle of old wine
infected by abnormal wishes.
Crawling into fake
carvings on a stone......
of an old love.
Stones broken by a stone crusher,
fighting back for emptiness
still a grain of rice.
Flew among the clouds,
a scarlet horse,
a prince, seeds of a vegetable,
a bride.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/24/2013 5:39:00 PM
Hello...yes this is awesome..congratulations
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/28/2013 7:03:00 AM
Thank You so much Donna.
Date: 6/23/2013 3:13:00 PM
This is a WOW. According to the comments below you won a contest with this and rightly so. Not sure words can express how wonderful this artful poem really is :)
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/24/2013 9:58:00 AM
I am so honored, thank you Karen.
Date: 6/23/2013 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!!! Bidhu Well done:)
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/24/2013 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Cherie.
Date: 6/22/2013 5:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/24/2013 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Heather.
Date: 6/22/2013 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/22/2013 6:21:00 AM
Thank you Kate
Date: 6/22/2013 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win sir............
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/22/2013 6:20:00 AM
Thank you Shiraz.
Date: 6/21/2013 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your grand win friend Bidhu :) Your poem is awesome...Cheers!! Maria :)
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/22/2013 3:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Maria...
Date: 6/20/2013 3:18:00 PM
Bidhu congratulations on your fine win. Welcome to PS. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/20/2013 10:43:00 PM
Than You so much Connie !
Date: 6/20/2013 1:32:00 PM
Hi, Bidhu, I was happy to see this one in my contest. Love the flow, and pace in your poem... thank you once again. Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. please enjoy all the other winners in my contest. you can find the winners on the members contest area, or you can visit my newest blog called " from HEART to HEART ..." stop by if you like. always & forever *LINDA
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/20/2013 10:42:00 PM
Thank You so much Linda, This was unexpected, you have inspired me....Bidhu.
Date: 6/18/2013 10:24:00 AM
Bidhu, sounds like a celebration. I wishing it to be that way again. welcome to the soup, and I hope you will like this community. Looking forward in reading your poems, *luv ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 6/17/2013 2:22:00 PM
SOUP MAIL...
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Date: 6/17/2013 1:24:00 PM
- Hello Bidhubhusan - thanks for your first poem, I hope there will be more in the future. - Welcome to P-Soup - Have fun with poetry, share your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read some of my poems. (give comment and get back) - Always nice with several new friends. - Good luck with your writing. - Have a great time here at P-Soup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/17/2013 2:02:00 PM
Than you for the warm welcome Anne. I am going through one of your poems.
Date: 6/17/2013 1:21:00 PM
A very interesting way of analyzing the things love this sir...........hope to hear more from you Regards Shiraz
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/17/2013 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Shiraz...just going through your poems :)
Date: 6/17/2013 12:58:00 PM
A wonderful finding, i like the way you ended the poem, Bidhubhusan. . Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/17/2013 1:11:00 PM
Dear Linda, thank you for the invitation. I am have always wanted to be a part of such a community. I will surely check out the contests and will be apart of it . Thank you again.
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