Scar

SCAR
On her right forearm she carries a scar,
Symbol of the comet and the fiery stars.
Found at the crossroads, a scar on the map,
Didn’t realize that her need was a trap.
Mindlessly she picks…she knows how to pick ’em.
When memory takes over does she ever think of him?
Remember the nights aglow with their fire
Caught up in the rapture, driven by desire.
Now she's burning bridges to keep herself warm
Taking full advantage of her nubile form
To get from men what she thinks she needs
And, despite what you’ve heard, she needs,
She bleeds from the scar that she feverishly picks…
Look long if you can she’ll be gone in a quick.
So, when she scratches her scar does she think of him?
Feel a pain in her heart or laugh with a grin?
The scar that burns in her soul like a star…
When words attack they, too, can leave a scar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/27/2016 12:58:00 PM
Beautiful poem Love the line, the scar that hurts in her soul like a star. Well written
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Date: 12/27/2016 12:58:00 PM
Beautiful poem Love the line, the scar that hurts in her soul like a star. Well written
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Date: 11/9/2016 6:58:00 AM
Fantastic! "The scar that burns in her soul like a star..." I love that line. Beautiful poem Phil.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 11/9/2016 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Storm, this one seems to have sparked a storm of interest. (I couldn't resist)
Date: 11/1/2016 9:44:00 AM
This was fantastic Phil. Love the line "Now she's burning bridges to keep herself warm" That was off the charts. The entire poem is great and I can feel the sadness you have created in her form, as well the warning of her needs which seem to be her heart's punishment. Wonderfully done.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 11/3/2016 7:24:00 AM
Many thanks Chris, I am very proud of that line...it just came to me one morning out of the blue...actually the morphogenic field but that is another book. Ciao.
Date: 10/31/2016 8:26:00 AM
Very well written. I love this and it has become a new favorite of mine.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 10/31/2016 5:52:00 PM
Thanks Tatiana, its amazing how pain can be what brings us together...we are not so different, we all experience it at sometime in our lives. Namaste.
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