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unrhymed tercets in a subject that matters 

Weight is held in the balance found wanting Heresy thought unorthodox behaviour drops the pearls under a great price A river of lies flows one after another devaluing family values Filled with the impurities of sin under an idiotic phase Resilient is the word Where modern day modesty sinks below par into hell's furnace We turn now and see branding irons casting lots Truth and chastity becomes tested in time entering through closed doors a one way ticket Modern day virtues are on their knees lead heavy and weak of the spirit Richeous is a way of dialogue that forces issues relating to fascists behaviour Unholy tongues sharpened with hostility Split scourges with venomous petition A war against equality begins With the bitterness craving acceptance Where there is no moral ground draws a battlefield under nature's existence The right of such education stands denied to parents whom remain without choice Violated beneath freedom of speech To speak openly on concerns and welfare in their soul's undervalued identity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/12/2017 4:15:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is a very powerful, excellent poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.So sad but beautifully penned with truth.Very heartfelt!And I totally agree with you.Yes,very sadly this world is truly a mess in all.All these terrible sad situations, injustices, hatred everywhere, makes my heart n' soul very sad.Prayers are very important n' powerful, we need pray alot more for all,but only God can fix it all, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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