Scales of Despair

the scale is stuck
it won't go up
and, worse, it won't go down
so here I stand
towel in hand
fat and sporting a frown

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/19/2015 8:44:00 AM
that is so funny what Jan said. I really liked this poem, by the way!! (and could not find the other poem you mentioned in your soupmail to me) See ya later, Mary.
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Date: 8/19/2015 8:43:00 AM
WEll, I don't want that scale to go up at ALL!!! But I wholly get your wanting it to go down! I threw out my scale five years ago. Just could not take seeing it any more. I gained ten to fifteen pounds, and it was very new for me because I had kept the same weight fairly consistently through all my adult life. I think I am at last ready to try a diet again. Counting calories simply is not working. Back to the old ATkins diet. (it will be my KICKOFF diet!) Hope it works like it did last time!
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Mary Rotman
Date: 8/19/2015 9:23:00 AM
Best of luck on the diet,
Date: 8/18/2015 1:47:00 PM
Drop the towel Mary you will weigh less!!! Hugs Jan xxx
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Mary Rotman
Date: 8/18/2015 2:04:00 PM
lol
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