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Scalding Passion

Scraping screaming skin with the very softest touch; A deceptive thief, so soothing filled with aloe; Poison passion is scalding.

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Date: 10/26/2023 7:19:00 PM
Poem reminds me of a boomerang. It start and ends with the same message. I love how you wove this tanka together.
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 10/26/2023 9:58:00 PM
I’m so glad you like it. Thank you.

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