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Sayin' Good-Bye

Setting on a park bench going nowhere
when a blind stranger taps me on one shoulder
he opens his newspaper, then says Right-There
look at that, would you, I say: I'm talkin' to a solider

Wait till I'm off this phone please
without another word he sets beside me,
opens a lunch box with a squeakie lid, sneeze
being that man I am, handing him a tissue, see

Ya know, feelin' imposed upon, yet he seeming friendly
I really wanted to be alone, though your here now said I
please make yourself comfortable, while I finish-calmly
saying Good-Bye

Waistin' no time at all to strike up a chat
he stated please Mr. did you read this mornin' paper
have you heard it's a funeral, an what people are sayin'
our king of Rock & 'Roll' passed, on his way to his maker

No-way, not today it's a beautiful day
are you sure it says that
have a look for yourself said he-ay
read it to me I'm blind, I thought as I set

I'd love to help you, only I can't read
Oh! I'm sorry I asked you
living in this park, what do you need, are you homeless,
Not at all kind Sir, stood-up with cane-I'm a little blind too

We said a small prayer, Thank you! Good-Bye Elvis
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:49 PM
Your brief meeting of the blind man at the park and the news of the death of Elvis, the great music maestro are very dramatically delineated ! Saying good bye is always painful.... ! Enjoyed reading the poem, Perry !
Campanella Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 12:54 AM
Hi, Valse -Thank You for your kind review - you have a nice way with words - stay safe too!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 7:15 AM
I was in Texas when I heard about Elvis passing. I was a bit young to be a fan but he was a talented fellow. A lot of good things in his life mixed in with the tragic.
Campanella Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 12:50 AM
hi, Richard- Thank you for your kind review - stay safe too!
Mcintosh Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 3:27 AM
interesting, intriguing, intense - miss Elvis. God bless you, Love, Gina
Campanella Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 3:40 AM
Thank You - Regina for your review - Bless your heart! stay safe too!
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