Say You'll Be Mine


Oh heart of mine be still as feathered quill 
like poetry Divine well paired and so consigned    
Oh self of innermost desire stoke me like fire  
and fill my hub with poetic bliss attire 
Oh love, oh love, my dove, fit me like a glove ! 

Oh joy of my soul bring forth your kiss 
in fervent Mesmur draw me in and sweet concur  
Oh  jewel of my pine, be my temple nave    
my loyal stave that saves
Oh love, oh love, my dove, your sent from up above

Oh enchanted one immobile as the noon day sun 
steady as a rock you are, inside this wedded hand  
Oh lover of eyes, lips and ears make room  
for a rose of scented value, yes I'm yours,  
Oh love, oh love, my dove, fly me to the moon

Oh love, oh love, my guy, please don't be shy 
say you'll be mine until the day we die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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DiMino Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 7:08 AM
Lovely masterpiece. You get a FAV from me. May your days be filled with love overflowing; flow never yielding, not to militant beavers' dams nor sharp manufactured bends. Wild like an uninhibited, primitive forest oblivious of time and space.
Rose  Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 3:53 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem Joe, hope you've been keeping well :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 11:41 AM
Your heart is always open for love. A poem full of emotion. Loved it. Hugs.
Rose  Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 6:14 PM
I try to remain open hearted Victor
Narain Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 8:40 AM
A beautiful, enchanting and heartfelt longings from the heart. Nice poem.
Rose  Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 6:14 PM
Glady you enjoyed it Jay :)
Pandit Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 5:00 AM
Sweet longings from the heart. Much enjoyed the quest of your poem--love exudes, my friend.
Rose  Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 6:14 PM
Your comments exude positivity always, :)
Rodgers Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 4:44 AM
Dear Rose, What an enchanting and heartfelt expression of love and longing. The lyrical flow creates such a beautiful and intimate atmosphere. I loved how your poetic words captured the essence of a deep, soulful connection, and I was truly moved by the passion and sincerity in each line. It's a breathtakingly beautiful piece. A real Gem! - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Rose  Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 6:13 PM
So glad you enjoyed the poem Daniel, have a lovely day tomorrow
Gifford Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:30 AM
A beautifully written poem, Rise. So touching and heartfelt. Have a great new week my friend.
Rose  Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 3:40 AM
Thank you for stopping by my poetry Zyrool :)
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:14 AM
Your title reminds me of a song i really love sweet rose! And your poem is so heartfelt and so touching! You always amaze me with how you express in such gentle delicately moving ways! This poem truly is soulful! I especially love the last lines! Best wishes for the contest.
Rose  Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 3:39 AM
I always appreciate your visit and your insightful comments, have a great day Ink,
Rolland Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 12:50 AM
so lovely poem, music of the heart is the best, enjoyed yann
Rose  Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 3:39 AM
Thank you for reading the poem Yann, God bless
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