Say My Name

Say My Name
    I lie here and consider the night sky
The stars flickering as clouds
 go drifting by
Time skips
Across the fingertips
Of God
As I drown
In a vast desert
Of want
Can you hear how my heart beats
In the rhythm of love?
Can you see 
like me
The stars burning above?
That's just how I feel
Like a candle
Crying waxy tears
I'll simply melt away
If I never hear you say
My name
Why don't you know me?
I am so lost and lonely
As I wait
How long until
I finally see your face?
A wonder to behold
Whether young or old
Your beauty is
Within your soul
Just once won't you
Hold me in your embrace?
Everything is turning gray
But desire never fades
I catch the scent of the wild flowers
In the warm breeze that push the clouds
Across the dark sky
So I'll
Stay here
Crying waxy tears
As I nurse the flame
Hoping to finally hear
You say
My name.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 4:15 PM
Dear Crystol, I really love your exploration of longing and desire, which is beautifully expressed through wonderful emotive language. The way you capture the essence of yearning for connection, for recognition, is truly captivating. Each line is filled with raw emotion, drawing me into this world of vulnerability and hope. I also loved the imagery of stars, clouds, and wildflowers for it adds depth and richness to the poem, showcasing the inner turmoil and longing. I feel your words linger, echoing the universal human experience of seeking validation and love. Crystol this a wonderful piece of poetry. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Woods Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 6:18 AM
Once again, what wonderful feedback! I hope I can do the same for those I comment on... it is such encouragement, I want to pass it on! Thank you Daniel
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