Say it like it is

As one with oneness,
I behold God’s light in each,
thus my love is platonic.

I know not concepts,
being uneducated,
so I live and die for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Baker Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 5:03 PM
A courageous path take accept in this life, Unseeking Seeker. Well said and well done, my friend. Bill
Seeker Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 9:19 PM
Thank you, Bill
Goldsmith Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 12:59 PM
I enjoyed reading this lovely write. I love your line, "I behold God’s light in each." So True... Have blessed day writing away.................
Seeker Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 9:10 PM
It has to do with the way we look at other forms; do we see only outer appearance or spirit indwelling it?
Rodgers Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Dear Seeker, I loved how your poem radiates simplicity yet profundity. It speaks of love in its purest form, transcending intellectual complexities. Your artistic words convey a deep connection to the divine and a commitment to love unconditionally. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Seeker Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 9:09 PM
Thank you, Daniel :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Seeker, your wisdom always leaves me amazed and so appreciative of the opportunities to read your poems. You have such a wonderful ability to speak volumes in your lines. Thank you for these moments of pleasant musing. Blessings of "God's light" to you as you see God in those around you - a gift!
Seeker Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 9:08 PM
Thank you, Sam dear. I’m happy you found value in these words.
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