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Saw Sails and Sun Set

Saw Sails and Sun Set Sun saw the sails set, And then sails saw the sun set; Together both met. Jim Horn

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Date: 4/3/2017 8:41:00 AM
Bonjour, I see that you set sail on an alliterative course that lovingly met the setting sun on the high seas :) Amitiés
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Date: 4/3/2017 5:46:00 PM
AMC, I never really did realize, That sails actually have eyes. Eyes may not see but are used to put rope through. JTH

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