Ralph Sergi Poet Dodoitsu

Savor

Savor
 Cherish all the good times whence
Love and Laughter did abound
Summon them to live anew
Savor once again
(Dodoitsu form)

Carpe Diem
I contemplate my image
In the mirror of my room
To put my plan in action
I will sieze the day
(Dodoitsu form)
Your favorite poem form contest
Nadya Ivette Negron  October 27, 2015

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Ralph Sergi November 8, 2015 at 12:23 PM Hi Daver: Well bless you,Daver. I'm not too far behind you but I try to hang on to the good times. Thanks for sharing.

Daver Austin November 8, 2015 at 10:28 AM At 86 I do a lot of cherishing. Don't know this form, but like it. Thanks for the visit. Love, daver

Terry O'Leary November 4, 2015 at 6:50 AM Congratulations for your win on this fine poem!

Len Gasun November 3, 2015 at 8:52 AM This is absolutely a brilliant piece as tribute to one of the most beautiful forms of poem but quite difficult one for me! :) Big congrats on your win my dear friend, Ralph! And thank you so much for sharing! God bless. Thank you so much as well for stopping by on my poem and your encouraging words. love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Sandra Haight November 2, 2015 at 12:55 PM Great tribute to the Dodoitsu form with your poem, Ralph! Congrats on your win! Sandra

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 2, 2015 at 12:15 PM Congratulations.

Skat A November 2, 2015 at 11:48 AM Ralph, awesome win. SKAT Ralph Sergi November 2, 2015 at 11:57 AM Thank you, SKAT A

Ralph Sergi October 31, 2015 at 8:37 PM Hi Andrea:Thank you and Happy Halloween to you too....BOO!

Andrea Dietrich October 31, 2015 at 5:48 PM You chose a great form to illustrate as your fave form, my friend. Happy halloween to you too.

Constance La France October 27, 2015 at 9:00 PM Ralph, I like that form very much also, both poems are great, best of luck in the contest ~ Ralph Sergi October 28, 2015 at 6:43 AM Hi BW: Thank you very much. It's one of my favorites.