Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

Savoir-Faire of the Great Bear

If you should hear him coming, fear his roar
His grizzled warnings, you should not ignore
A formidable champion is Ursus, a carnivore
His claws protects those he loves with vigour

He confidently stands on two powerful legs
to liberate the world from its deviant dregs
Quite beastly is his gnarly savoir-faire attitude
when in combat with the insolent and the rude

He'd prefer to live in harmony with c'est la vie,
thinking, That's life and what will be will be
But he will fight when needed... c'est la guerre
Off to war with courage, strides the Great Bear

With one arm held in check, he'll not be denied
the voice to rebuke those who abuse and deride
If blinded in one eye, he would never hold back
To defend those in need he would bravely attack

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Vladislav Raven November 4, 2018 at 7:18 AM Hi Lin, a tribute that I know shall be much deserved for whomever it was written for. The strength and the heart of the bear is second to none, such a strong metaphor. I love the content of this write. The power held within the words. Once again you place before us a wonderful piece. May your words ever grace the Soup. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX Lin Lane November 6, 2018 at 10:10 AM Thank you so very much for leaving such encouraging and insightful remarks, Mike.

Charlie Smith November 3, 2018 at 7:28 AM Did I you write this as a metaphor for your protector or our service men and women? Either way, very well done my ,dear... Lin Lane November 3, 2018 at 10:15 AM I had a friend in mind when these thoughts came to me. Thanks, dear man.

Robert Lindley November 1, 2018 at 8:27 AM Brilliantly crafted poetry as always my dear friend. Whomever this person is, I must say I truly like him. Those that attack others and live upon the misery they cause are hideous beasts walking in human form. Great poem, a fav.. Lin Lane November 1, 2018 at 6:58 PM He's quite worthy of the lines I've written about his character. Thanks for the read and thoughtful comments, Robert.

Seren Roberts October 31, 2018 at 12:31 AM loved it Lin. ...Seren Lin Lane October 31, 2018 at 6:49 AM Thanks so much, Seren.

John Gondolf October 30, 2018 at 4:36 PM The Great Bear is magnificent from afar but one must always keep their distance lest they be taken down. Nicely written, Lin. Lin Lane October 31, 2018 at 6:49 AM Thank you, but the bear of whom I write can also be of the teddy type...soft and cuddly when his ears are scratched.

Richard Lamoureux October 30, 2018 at 8:24 AM Reading this poem I thought of Russia which is described as a great Bear. The Great Bear stood strong in World War Two and helped turn the tide against The Nazi invaders. I enjoyed this poem. Lin Lane October 30, 2018 at 9:20 AM Thank you, Rick. It seems Russia can still wear the name, but not as a friend. Thanks for the read and leaving your comment.

Tom Cunningham October 30, 2018 at 7:40 AM Lovely verse Lin, I see from the comments it could be a person and if that's the case then there is no one better to have at your side. Before I started reading it the bear in the revanant came to mind . Tom Lin Lane October 30, 2018 at 7:55 AM Oh, Tom! The scene of the bear attack in that movie was gruesome, and yet it held me spellbound. I knew he'd attack again and I sat there, cringing. The ferocity of such a wild beast is frightening, but having a great bear on your side is an honor. Thanks so much for your welcomed remarks.

Darren White October 30, 2018 at 1:06 AM Lin, this is a wonderful tribute, and so well written! I love it, and I am sure he will too :) Lin Lane October 30, 2018 at 5:00 AM Hi, Darren. Thanks for adding your kind comments to the others. They're always appreciated.

Tim Smith October 29, 2018 at 6:50 PM A wonderful ode Lin, you have a great heart. Lin Lane October 30, 2018 at 4:54 AM Thank you for such a sweet comment, Tim. I really appreciate your thoughts.

Jan Allison October 29, 2018 at 4:10 PM Not sure if its metaphorical or not Lin but whatever the case I'd want him on my side:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane October 29, 2018 at 5:02 PM I think you have no need to fear, Jan. His growls are not meant for everyone.

Winged Warrior October 29, 2018 at 3:48 PM The bear necessity of poetry lol...strong write Laney...love & light...^WW^ Lin Lane October 29, 2018 at 5:00 PM Thanks, WW. Strong words to characterize friend or foe.

Arturo Michael October 29, 2018 at 3:27 PM I have these creatures from a distance...certainly won't play around there...A nice write on the Great Bear...All the best Lin Lin Lane October 29, 2018 at 4:56 PM Thanks, Arturo. An awesome creature, for sure.

Chris Green October 29, 2018 at 2:45 PM This was wonderful Lin. I am not sure if the bear in your poem is a metaphor for a person living today so I will take it as I read it and say it is a magnificent poem as is the grizzly bear which in my opinion is one of the most majestic and dangerous animals on the planet. Lin Lane October 29, 2018 at 4:55 PM The bear can be many things to many people. I agree with your assessment of a bear, Chris, and thanks for the compliment.