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I Love You

There's a cross....in Jerusalem Waiting there......for everyone Justice speaks...One word Guilty The hammer rules in the darkness there Death confirmed....by a Roman spear There's a cross in Jerusalem..... Oh but wait...... There's a baby in Bethlehem! Savior There's a house.....falling fast Foundation tears....Stones are cast Future speaks.....one word Uncertainty Chaos rules......in the turmoil there Wounded pride....Rips the atmosphere There's a house......falling fast Oh but wait...... There's a carpenter in Nazareth Savior copyright

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Date: 7/6/2017 10:37:00 AM
I agree w/Maria, this was an absolute pleasure to read, Chuck. An glowing tribute paid to the Messiah. Stunning poetry. Love always.
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Date: 7/5/2017 8:21:00 AM
A pleasure to read you song my friend...Maria
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 7/5/2017 12:22:00 PM
Maris, Thanks so much! He so loves us. Chuck
Date: 5/30/2017 7:57:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem you wrote.
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 5/31/2017 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Darlene. I appreciate your review of my work. Our Savior makes our day! My best to you and yours, chuck
Date: 5/20/2017 8:15:00 AM
I agree w/the other poetesses/poets, a beautiful poem of praise, Chuck. You really put a smile on this Christian's face. Wonderful poetry. May love light your path always.
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Date: 5/20/2017 9:04:00 AM
Thank you Freddie for the wonderful review.You are my brother and I am proud!! My best, chuck
Date: 5/19/2017 6:33:00 PM
Excellent inspirational poem about our Savior Jesus Chuck!~Che :)
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 5/20/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thanks so much ,Cheryl. Your review is appreciated. My best, chuck
Date: 5/5/2017 3:19:00 PM
Hi Chuck, this is an excellent write. I Love the content within this poem. You have let your heart sing my friend. The words touch the Soul Chuck. Have a great weekend. Your Friend Always....Mike. This has to be a seven Chuck.
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Date: 5/6/2017 9:48:00 AM
Dear Mike, a wonderful comment that touches my heart, from a dear friend. God bless Mike always. chuck
Date: 4/26/2017 1:48:00 PM
A 7 and more for this one. I love it. Thank you for your Comments about "My Loved Hero. Love, joyce
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/26/2017 2:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joyce. Your sweet words are greatly appreciated. God bless, chuck
Date: 4/24/2017 4:34:00 PM
glorious melody... a facet of the Savior well done, chuck..huggs
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/25/2017 6:14:00 PM
Nette, I am thankful for your kind words. You encourage me to write more. God bless, chuck
Date: 4/24/2017 9:25:00 AM
Excellent Chuck...I know that Carpenter
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/25/2017 6:11:00 PM
Thanks Tim. Awesome statement! God bless, chuck

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