Notes About The Poem

I Love You

Savior

There's a cross....in Jerusalem
Waiting there......for everyone
Justice speaks...One word
Guilty

The hammer rules in the darkness there
Death confirmed....by a Roman spear
There's a cross in Jerusalem.....
Oh but wait......
There's a baby in Bethlehem!

Savior

There's a house.....falling fast
Foundation tears....Stones are cast
Future speaks.....one word
Uncertainty

Chaos rules......in the turmoil there
Wounded pride....Rips the atmosphere
There's a house......falling fast
Oh but wait......
There's a carpenter in Nazareth

Savior




copyright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 10:37 AM
I agree w/Maria, this was an absolute pleasure to read, Chuck. An glowing tribute paid to the Messiah. Stunning poetry. Love always.
Williams Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 8:21 AM
A pleasure to read you song my friend...Maria
Melugin Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 12:22 PM
Maris, Thanks so much! He so loves us. Chuck
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 7:57 PM
This is a wonderful poem you wrote.
Melugin Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Thanks Darlene. I appreciate your review of my work. Our Savior makes our day! My best to you and yours, chuck
Robinson Jr. Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 8:15 AM
I agree w/the other poetesses/poets, a beautiful poem of praise, Chuck. You really put a smile on this Christian's face. Wonderful poetry. May love light your path always.
Melugin Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 9:04 AM
Thank you Freddie for the wonderful review.You are my brother and I am proud!! My best, chuck
Hoffman Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 6:33 PM
Excellent inspirational poem about our Savior Jesus Chuck!~Che :)
Melugin Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Thanks so much ,Cheryl. Your review is appreciated. My best, chuck
Raven Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 3:19 PM
Hi Chuck, this is an excellent write. I Love the content within this poem. You have let your heart sing my friend. The words touch the Soul Chuck. Have a great weekend. Your Friend Always....Mike. This has to be a seven Chuck.
Melugin Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Dear Mike, a wonderful comment that touches my heart, from a dear friend. God bless Mike always. chuck
Johnson Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 1:48 PM
A 7 and more for this one. I love it. Thank you for your Comments about "My Loved Hero. Love, joyce
Melugin Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 2:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joyce. Your sweet words are greatly appreciated. God bless, chuck
Onclaud Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 4:34 PM
glorious melody... a facet of the Savior well done, chuck..huggs
Melugin Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Nette, I am thankful for your kind words. You encourage me to write more. God bless, chuck
Smith Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Excellent Chuck...I know that Carpenter
Melugin Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 6:11 PM
Thanks Tim. Awesome statement! God bless, chuck
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace