I Love You

Savior

There's a cross....in Jerusalem
Waiting there......for everyone
Justice speaks...One word
Guilty

The hammer rules in the darkness there
Death confirmed....by a Roman spear
There's a cross in Jerusalem.....
Oh but wait......
There's a baby in Bethlehem!

Savior

There's a house.....falling fast
Foundation tears....Stones are cast
Future speaks.....one word
Uncertainty

Chaos rules......in the turmoil there
Wounded pride....Rips the atmosphere
There's a house......falling fast
Oh but wait......
There's a carpenter in Nazareth

Savior




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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/6/2017 10:37:00 AM

I agree w/Maria, this was an absolute pleasure to read, Chuck. An glowing tribute paid to the Messiah. Stunning poetry. Love always.

Maria Williams

Date: 7/5/2017 8:21:00 AM

A pleasure to read you song my friend...Maria

Chuck Melugin
Date: 7/5/2017 12:22:00 PM

Maris, Thanks so much! He so loves us. Chuck

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/30/2017 7:57:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem you wrote.

Chuck Melugin
Date: 5/31/2017 8:04:00 AM

Thanks Darlene. I appreciate your review of my work. Our Savior makes our day! My best to you and yours, chuck

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/20/2017 8:15:00 AM

I agree w/the other poetesses/poets, a beautiful poem of praise, Chuck. You really put a smile on this Christian's face. Wonderful poetry. May love light your path always.

Chuck Melugin
Date: 5/20/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thank you Freddie for the wonderful review.You are my brother and I am proud!! My best, chuck

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 5/19/2017 6:33:00 PM

Excellent inspirational poem about our Savior Jesus Chuck!~Che :)

Chuck Melugin
Date: 5/20/2017 9:48:00 AM

Thanks so much ,Cheryl. Your review is appreciated. My best, chuck

Vladislav Raven

Date: 5/5/2017 3:19:00 PM

Hi Chuck, this is an excellent write. I Love the content within this poem. You have let your heart sing my friend. The words touch the Soul Chuck. Have a great weekend. Your Friend Always....Mike. This has to be a seven Chuck.

Chuck Melugin
Date: 5/6/2017 9:48:00 AM

Dear Mike, a wonderful comment that touches my heart, from a dear friend. God bless Mike always. chuck