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Saving the Best Till Last

All I could do was stand and stare
Your actions caught me unaware

I’d got it earmarked all for me
To enjoy with my cup of tea

I arrived in the room – my eyes grew wide
The very last chocolate éclair, it was inside
YOUR mouth
ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
MEN!

11~25~14
Contest: Green Eyed Monster
Sponser: Verlena. S. Walker

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2014

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Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/3/2015 10:35:00 AM Interesting and fantastic write on the theme of jealousy, congrats on the win, Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/3/2015 11:20:00 AM Thanks so much for dropping by Dr Mehta:-) Hugs jan x

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 1/3/2015 2:10:00 AM Congrats on your fine win Jan... huggs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/3/2015 4:32:00 AM many thanks for dropping by Kayod5:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/2/2015 11:32:00 PM JAN, Congratulations on your win. Awesome "Green-Eyed Monster, poem." Love LINDA Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/3/2015 4:32:00 AM Thanks Linda:-) Hugs jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 1/2/2015 7:44:00 PM oh I enjoyed this one at the first post Jan,glad it was recognized .congratulations on your win Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/2/2015 7:45:00 PM Thanks so much Robert:-) hugs janxxx

Reason A. Poteet Date: 1/2/2015 7:08:00 PM Had the same feeling when my husband took the last cream puff on Christmas Day. They're much smaller than eclairs. Good one, Jan, congrats on your win. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/2/2015 7:14:00 PM Nothing more infuriating is there! Hugs jan xxx

Verlena S. Walker Date: 1/2/2015 2:58:00 PM As a winner of my contest, I congratulate you! Verlena Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/2/2015 3:01:00 PM Many thanks Verlena I had fun with this one:-) Hugs jan xxx

Arlene Smith Date: 12/10/2014 9:54:00 PM Baa haa haa!!!.. Jerry says I eat up the last of everything! Lol... Hey, you snooze, you loose at my house!!.. ;-).. Hugs.. Arlene Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/11/2014 12:39:00 AM Thanks for dropping by Arlene:-) Hugs jan xx

Funom Makama Date: 12/3/2014 10:55:00 AM This is a lovely piece and its a blessing to read it. Nice work.. Have a lovely week ahead Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/3/2014 11:11:00 AM Thanks so much Funom:-) Hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/26/2014 1:39:00 PM You know Andrea will love this one, I can hear her laughing already. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/26/2014 2:50:00 PM Hope she gets to read it Maurice:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/26/2014 1:37:00 PM Don't be jealous you are quite the chocolate eclair yourself. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/26/2014 2:50:00 PM yes I'm small and delectable lol hugs jan xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/26/2014 10:37:00 AM Very humorous pen Jan! Lol...A 7 for you! Have a lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/26/2014 2:49:00 PM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Dorian:-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/26/2014 5:08:00 AM lol: )Who can.resist Chocolate eclairs my dear? : ) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/26/2014 5:17:00 AM sadly not my husband! Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 11/25/2014 5:15:00 PM Great humour and take on this contest subject, Jan. Luckily you might still have some snickers left to make up for it! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 5:17:00 PM I still have 4 of the 6 bars left Paul.... Bob doesn't eat them lol! Hugs jan xxx

Perry Mcdaid Date: 11/25/2014 4:02:00 PM A brilliant bit of humour in couplets showing how rhyme can serve the poem and not vice versa. Great stuff. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 4:08:00 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Perry:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser Date: 11/25/2014 3:31:00 PM I do declare, I swore it was there, haha!! Love it Jan. If that doesn't take the cake, erm! biscuit ;-) xx James Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 3:33:00 PM Lol James:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jack Horne Date: 11/25/2014 3:13:00 PM LMAO, had a good chuckle here - love your sense of fun and humour Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 3:17:00 PM Thank you Jack - can Ipoint you in the direction of my poem 'Santa is coming' lol :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 11/25/2014 2:29:00 PM ahh poor Jan ,he could have left you half but then no muse, lol Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 2:31:00 PM So true Robert and no calories either - think he thought he was doing me a favour lol:-) hugs jan xxx

David Meade Date: 11/25/2014 2:24:00 PM We do think with our stomachs and it goes down from there. . . good luck! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 2:25:00 PM You said it David lol:-) hugs Jan xxxx

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/25/2014 2:11:00 PM Forgot to eat the seven. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 2:14:00 PM aww thank you so much:-) hugs jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/25/2014 2:10:00 PM I love this Jan. I feel your pain but can't help but laugh at the picture you painted here. A 7 for your humour, and a fav for your pain. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 2:13:00 PM You know me Brenda lol :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith Date: 11/25/2014 1:51:00 PM Sorry Jan I do love eclairs...lol...this is great...hugs Tim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 1:55:00 PM me too Tim ... but when you are so looking forward to it and you see the final bit disappearing it is heartbreaking lol - guess he thought I didn't need the calories and he was doing me a favour lol:-) hugs Jan x