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Saved a Soul Saving Myself

Saved a kind soul that was falling
with nothing to lose 
just one abdomen, no sharp fangs 
but huge.

And what's worse 
the carton I called home, 
my dark universe 
upturned 
just a moment ago..

Uprooted now, I went crawling 
trying my best to live
running from certain death 
knowin it may arrive  
wondering why..
always such a test
to survive..

Was it all for naught
to flee such an attack
an octet onslaught  
crawling this way and that.

The sky lifts now, feeling of flight 
so frightened..
yet never so alive!
 
Found myself being gently placed
a tissue'd touch down 
in a new universe.

'Never too late, never in vain'
thought a subtle, good natured arachnid mind
who found heart in a two-legged fangless one's reign 
so divine.

"A life is never squandered"
another life pondered
in a good deed, a kindness repaid
perhaps it's just this
how kings and queens are made.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/21/2023 7:33:00 AM
Thought provoking poem and the line, wondering why always such a test to survive?. Well written Richard. Every moment is precious. Simplicity at its best :)
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Date: 6/18/2023 12:24:00 AM
Beautiful and moving verse, Richard. A life is never, never squandered. In Gods we all are His world. Blessings
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Date: 6/16/2023 3:49:00 PM
I came back to read this brilliant creation yet again my friend. Especially to note the last stanza! A true gem it is. God bless....
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Date: 6/11/2023 8:23:00 AM
Such unique imagery for your deep marvelous theme.
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Date: 6/11/2023 1:08:00 AM
Such is life, Richard! There is no smooth road guaranteed for any of us, and obstacles / temptations will always be there to test us. ~ Hope life is being kind to you, my friend. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/17/2023 12:22:00 PM
Hi Paul, "No smooth roads guaranteed"..., I like that. Waxing philosophic minds & muscles, there's no harm in that. “You cannot do a kindness too soon, for you never know when it will be too late.” — Ralph Waldo Emerson
Date: 6/5/2023 7:31:00 AM
-"so scared.. yet never so alive" an overwhelming feeling, Richard - An excellent poem - hugs
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Date: 6/17/2023 11:53:00 AM
Anne-Lise, Thank you for your overwhelming feeling comment. Can we really know the meaning of alive without fearing its sudden end? Well wishes and roller-coaster rides in yours. -Richard
Date: 6/4/2023 11:41:00 AM
Brilliant poetry my friend. Yes life is a journey of joy and also of struggles. One must learn how to fight, march ever onward and not let the dark hand win. A true fav , God bless...
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Date: 6/4/2023 8:55:00 PM
Robert, Good to see this and hear from you friend. Always heading toward the light. -Richard
Date: 6/4/2023 4:51:00 AM
Thumbs up! I’ve “saved” these lesser souls myself. Something about it. Best, John
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Date: 6/4/2023 8:50:00 PM
John, Yes.., something about it. Recognize a living thing, join in the fight even for a chance moment, something about it. -Richard
Date: 6/4/2023 4:49:00 AM
A very entertaining look at life my friend. Object lessons to be learned. Our struggles are never over... but we can mitigate the bumps along the way. Have a great day.
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Date: 6/4/2023 8:45:00 PM
Hi David, Remember James Herriot's book 'All Creatures Great and Small'? I wish you a great day too. -Richard
Date: 6/4/2023 12:50:00 AM
touching lesson, about esperance, enjoyed yann
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Date: 6/4/2023 8:32:00 PM
Thank you yann. I appreciate the comment. -Richard

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