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My first write last May 2015 


Live.....
Experience fully! every moment - all! 
I sat on the sand feet indented
as the water gently laped them 
then powerfully left....

As the footprints of old....
I/We were saved.

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/25/2016 9:20:00 AM

This is beautiful and creative. Thank you so much for this lovely and useful share....

Kim Difford
Date: 2/26/2016 3:20:00 AM

Thank you Funom, wonderful! you felt that, truly! glad it was inspirational, I really! appreciate your encouragement it means a lot!. This was my first poem last year, I had a near! accident. I have always loved words and expressions.

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/17/2016 6:24:00 PM

You were touched by an Angel For this I am sure For your mind is full of Love And your heart is truly pure Listen to their whispers For they will guide you all the way Life is full of surprises And you shall meet them again one day. God bless...^WW^

Kim Difford
Date: 2/18/2016 4:39:00 AM

Lovely!, WW, kind! words, special! encouragement. Yes, so! true life is full of surprises, I love that word durprises. This was written last year after a near! accident, God meant me to be here a bit longer!. A special! surprise is being on this site, for the unique and special! individuals, I truly! feel blessed! God Bless, Kim

Jean Murray

Date: 2/15/2016 4:59:00 PM

Beautiful. Powerful.

Kim Difford
Date: 2/15/2016 5:41:00 PM

I really! appreciate that Jean, truly! means a lot!. It was written after a near! accident I and someone had, I am meant to be here a bit longer THANK GOD!, my writing is such a beautiful, treasured gift I DO THANK GOD! for.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/13/2016 5:55:00 PM

Thank you for the sweet reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/13/2016 5:48:00 PM

WOW, I like the footprint line. Reminds me of life... ;) Happy Valentines to you..... XOX ~Love LINDA~

Kim Difford
Date: 2/13/2016 5:55:00 PM

It means a lot! you like it. Kim

Kim Difford
Date: 2/13/2016 5:54:00 PM

Linda Hi, THANK YOU!!, so!!, much for your encouragement. Glad!, you enjoyed it. You are right, the footprint line is based on life, two lives saved!THANK GOD!. Happy!, Valentines to you Linda, thank you!, Kim x