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warm tears fall from my weakened eyes to the tathered ground
as my ears begain to silence the sound

shadows of evil surround my presents
as spirits of light fall in my essence

my brother....
my brother....

your nearing the light
just try to repent and continue your fight

as the paster raise my hands in this joyous occasion
i felt the spirits of darkness evasion
the invasion of my lord enter my personal equation
now what is going to be my ceremonial occasion?

my eyes begain to brighten i am no longer lost
as the city of fallen angels start to pay their own cost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 1:27 AM
Like the inner poem in th first couplet Tevin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Winter Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 1:06 PM
You are indeed writing your heart and soul out here, and so beautifully at that. Welcome to PoetrySoup and may you continue to find lighter and brighter days. Love, Shar
 Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 1:23 PM
Finding the light of faith is truly an amazing gift. Blessing to you for sharing this story with us. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Poe Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 10:37 AM
He is good!
Wilson Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 12:56 AM
A multitude of Angels rejoice over one sinner saved. Welcome Tevin A great testimony may God use you in a mighty way. Have a wonderful Easter Brother Keep Praising. Leon ps Great surname
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April 9, 2009 at 11:48 PM
Welcome to poetry soup Tevin. I hope you enjoy your stay. Nice couplet by the way...Raul
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April 9, 2009 at 9:04 PM
true story
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