Saved

warm tears fall from my weakened eyes to the tathered ground
as my ears begain to silence the sound

shadows of evil surround my presents
as spirits of light fall in my essence

my brother....
my brother....

your nearing the light
just try to repent and continue your fight

as the paster raise my hands in this joyous occasion
i felt the spirits of darkness evasion
the invasion of my lord enter my personal equation
now what is going to be my ceremonial occasion?

my eyes begain to brighten i am no longer lost
as the city of fallen angels start to pay their own cost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/13/2009 1:27:00 AM
Like the inner poem in th first couplet Tevin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Login to Reply
Date: 4/11/2009 1:06:00 PM
You are indeed writing your heart and soul out here, and so beautifully at that. Welcome to PoetrySoup and may you continue to find lighter and brighter days. Love, Shar
Login to Reply
Date: 4/10/2009 1:23:00 PM
Finding the light of faith is truly an amazing gift. Blessing to you for sharing this story with us. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Login to Reply
Date: 4/10/2009 10:37:00 AM
He is good!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/10/2009 12:56:00 AM
A multitude of Angels rejoice over one sinner saved. Welcome Tevin A great testimony may God use you in a mighty way. Have a wonderful Easter Brother Keep Praising. Leon ps Great surname
Login to Reply
Date: 4/9/2009 11:48:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup Tevin. I hope you enjoy your stay. Nice couplet by the way...Raul
Login to Reply
Date: 4/9/2009 9:04:00 PM
true story
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter