Saved

A broken-winged bird perches
on a loosely thin birch,
watching peacefully the sunset
and the milky pink clouds.

The breast heaves in and out,
and the beak lets out a shout
squealing chirps for a help
before the crumbling of the birch.

A broken-winged bird flashes
of early memories that passes
since it cracked from egg
in the homey nest on a roof-top.

And it falls! Crippled but a live.
There's no life that it can strive,
but I take it in a little shoe box,
feed it often before it heals.

I'd like to see that bird to fly,
across the silken, velvet sky.
Keep it closely to my heart,
as savior for a newer start.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Richards Avatar
August 22, 2008 at 8:31 PM
Oh my....what a tender, sweet poem! Poor little bird....I hope it can fly again! ....Sincerely, Carrie
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August 3, 2008 at 4:39 PM
The interesting imagery works to foward your thoughts in this poem. I like the positive ending. Keep on writing! Best wishes. Karen
Jordan Avatar
August 3, 2008 at 4:58 AM
Brittany - My daughter recently found a finch that had fell out of its nest - it didn't have a single feather yet - We fed it canned dog food and raised it - Now its a member of our family - Good luck with yours - God Bless
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