Barbara Gorelick Poet Pantoum

Save Your Pennies

Single pennies  wont get you much these days
Hardly anything can you buy for a cent
Cents can become dollars if squirreled away
Save enough pennies you can pay the rent

Hardly anything can you buy for a cent
Yet I still pick up those pennies that I see
Save enough pennies you can pay the rent
Its a good place to start you'll have to agree

Yet I still pick up those pennies that I see
Cents can become dollars if squirreled away
Its a good place to start you'll have to agree
Single pennies won't get you much these days

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 26, 2012 at 5:38 AM A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick September 25, 2012 at 5:00 PM Congrats on your winning work...Sara

Kash Poet September 25, 2012 at 12:26 PM I love this BG!Writing a Pantoum is not easy and you have done it in just 3 stanzas.This is an example of a very good pantoum!Congrats on your win.

Jack Horne September 15, 2012 at 2:44 PM clever pantoum, my friend - I really struggle with this form, but yours is great

Russell Sivey September 13, 2012 at 9:56 PM This is an awesome write Barbara! I really enjoyed reading this harmonious poem this evening! This piece is truly wondrous, and fits into the contest rather nicely! You should do well! Great Work!!