Deborah Burch Poet Jueju

Save the Jungle

Save The Jungle

Humid sunlight trickles through
Misty greens of tangled hue
Tracing shadowed amber eyes
Watching...fading tiger dies. 

3.24.2017©deborah burch 


Jueju
4lines/7syllab

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Kim Merryman April 13, 2017 at 4:13 PM Powerful imagery in this jueju, Deborah! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

James Inman April 3, 2017 at 8:51 AM This is really lovely Deborah.

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 7:56 PM wow, this is amazing,Deborah!!! SEVEN. One of the best I've read.

Constance La France April 2, 2017 at 4:55 PM Deborah congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju, it made me so sad

Joanna Daniel March 26, 2017 at 8:16 AM Superb, Deborah:) a 7:) great imagery:) Deborah Burch March 28, 2017 at 9:34 PM Thank you Jo!! Your encouragement means so much. :)