Save Our Children From Slavery

Save our children from slavery........ Our beautiful children are forced to hard labor by some of the evil people on earth And they kill their soul. Those little hands are holding hard tools instead of holding school books Those little hands are touching dirty sand instead of their mother's hands They listen to their evil men called masters instead of their school teachers Struggling for their bread at infant stage instead for the struggling for their career Mothers are crying for their children and want to save them from their darkness of future Many years have been passed but not a single year has been cared for them Because of our careless leadership our children are still living in slavery Let us join together and save our little children from the hell of slavery. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2015

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Date: 5/29/2017 4:29:00 PM
well, I was clicking on everything and could not find a poem of yours I had not read already and then I clicked on BEST poetry of Ravi and this was number one. This is REALLy nice, Ravi. I can see why it's among your very best. TEN (the new seven!) Think I will fave this one too.
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Date: 3/19/2017 6:25:00 AM
A very emotional read. Children should be allowed to play and spread their joy, how sad that adults should use them to feed their greed. What type of world do we live in?
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Date: 11/18/2016 6:16:00 AM
I see on TV and hear on the radio that this is being done and in some incidences by trickery..It does need to stop..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 8/12/2015 5:06:00 PM
Awesome write, and very true for many kids and adults around this planet , Thank you for reading my Notes poem :)
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Date: 8/3/2015 5:16:00 PM
Very emotive and expressive work..That kind of thing happens all over the world..Children should be allowed to be children..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/20/2015 8:05:00 PM
Ravi, -this poem is so emotional and heartbreaking, each word drips with your sadness 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Date: 4/16/2015 10:51:00 PM
G'day Ravi... its about time the leaders in this world got their priorities right and protected the children so when they grow they will protect the new generation of children... but sadly greed over rides compassion. Regards - Lindsay
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Date: 4/5/2015 12:42:00 PM
This is a very touching write my dear friend, Ravi. Let's pray that these children will be saved. Thank you so much for sharing! Hope you're doing well. Stopping by to greet you as well a Blessed Easter Season! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/29/2015 9:46:00 PM
RAVI, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/23/2015 9:06:00 AM
Well done, Ravi, for raising awareness on this sad, important topic. Unbelievable in this present age and time! // All the best. // paul
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Date: 3/19/2015 11:19:00 PM
So beautiful and so very important to save not only our little children, but men and women that are suffering. Wonderful write a 7 blessings dear friend
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 3/23/2015 4:09:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated
Date: 3/18/2015 11:29:00 PM
You have written important words of humanity...we should not be silent and ignore the plight of our world's children...I applaud you, Ravi! Hugs, Rhonda
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 3/23/2015 4:10:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated
Date: 3/18/2015 8:02:00 AM
a very humane poem as it address the need of the young.. im one with you!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 3/23/2015 4:10:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated
Date: 3/18/2015 1:02:00 AM
it's heartbreaking to know this goes on...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 3/23/2015 4:10:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated
Date: 3/17/2015 4:27:00 PM
So sad Ravi. Thanks for bringing this to light...Tim
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Date: 3/23/2015 4:10:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated
Date: 3/17/2015 5:14:00 AM
- A powerful theme and very well written poem, dear Ravi - I wish you a beautiful day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 3/23/2015 4:12:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment my dear friend Anne. Appreciated. Love & hugs xxxxx
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