Save Me

I have never been so distraught. This pain I am feeling, It gets worse everyday. I wish I didn't have to live this way... I want to leave here, I know what I want. I know where I should be. And here? it is not. 05/08/2017

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Lynn Marie

Date: 5/12/2017 9:17:00 AM

A lot of emotion in few words that are expressive of deep frustration. Very well written Alex, it's a subject many can relate to and the last line is a great ending, as can be seen as a bit of hope. I enjoy losing myself in a poets words, their story, your words make others 'feel' happy, anger, loss, joy etc. all life emotions we relate to, imagine reading something you had no familiarity with or even the tiniest knowledge or interest in...it would be boring if you can't relate. I relate:)

Alex Anonymous
Date: 5/12/2017 1:58:00 PM

I am glad you can understand my feelings through my words. I write of pain, which makes things better. Thank you! :)

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 5/8/2017 12:45:00 PM

Such a sad write.

Alex Anonymous
Date: 5/8/2017 2:07:00 PM

I know, I apologize :?

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 5/8/2017 9:11:00 AM

it's a trap, isn't it?

Alex Anonymous
Date: 5/8/2017 2:07:00 PM

Yes, it is.