Save Me

I have never been so distraught. 
This pain I am feeling,
It gets worse everyday.
I wish I didn't have to live this way...
I want to leave here,
I know what I want.
I know where I should be.
And here? it is not.











05/08/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Marie Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 9:17 AM
A lot of emotion in few words that are expressive of deep frustration. Very well written Alex, it's a subject many can relate to and the last line is a great ending, as can be seen as a bit of hope. I enjoy losing myself in a poets words, their story, your words make others 'feel' happy, anger, loss, joy etc. all life emotions we relate to, imagine reading something you had no familiarity with or even the tiniest knowledge or interest in...it would be boring if you can't relate. I relate:)
Grace Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 1:58 PM
I am glad you can understand my feelings through my words. I write of pain, which makes things better. Thank you! :)
Kinch  Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 12:45 PM
Such a sad write.
Grace Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 2:07 PM
I know, I apologize :?
Cozart Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 9:11 AM
it's a trap, isn't it?
Grace Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Yes, it is.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace