Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Free verse

Save Environment-W

Just got back from India
Had amazing experience
Transformed in ways
That is everything homely.
Do you use toilet paper?
Terrible for environment
Use hands
And bucket of water

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Sixth place win in
Contest :29 words 

1. Just                                    11.ways                      21.Terrible
2. Got                                     12.That                       22. For
 3. Back                                 13.is                             23. Environment
4. from                                 14. Everything           24. Use
5. India                                  15. Homely                 25.hands
6. Had                                   16. Do                         26. And
7. Amazing                           17.  You                       27. Bucket          
8. Experience                      18. Use                        28. of
9. transformed                  19. Toilet                     29. water
10. in                                   20. paper

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Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2010 at 8:43 PM Well, that was sure interesting. I think I missed it earlier! Congratulations,Dr. Ram! LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts September 25, 2010 at 11:54 AM congrats Dr. Ram on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown September 24, 2010 at 11:26 AM Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram in Nikko Palmario's contest "29 Words". Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne September 23, 2010 at 5:20 PM congrats to you Dr Ram on your enlightening win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 23, 2010 at 11:19 AM Congrats Dr. Ram on your win in Nikko's contest.. another amazing poem.. another awesome victory so sweet.. enjoy my friend with luv...

Kabuteng P.Ink K. September 23, 2010 at 10:50 AM Hi Dr. Ram :) Well this sure was wonderful advice in saving the environment but uh-oh ummm I need toilet paper -- I think I need to plant more trees now!!! Congrats on your win in my contest :) -- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 16, 2010 at 3:40 PM Awesome entry Dr. Ram..good luck in Nikko's contest.. great insight on India and its changes.. enjoyed the reality of it all..lluv.. glad u are safely home..did u receive your package at son's home??? should have arrived by now..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown September 14, 2010 at 3:10 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dr. Ram. Wishing you the best in the contest. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick September 14, 2010 at 4:20 AM Well, this one kinda took my words away...Good luck in the contest with this one..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn for it aquainted me with something new...Sara

Wilma Neels September 14, 2010 at 1:30 AM Dr. Ram, I just love your entry... Had to laugh out loud at your last two lines :) Thanks for the laughs and good luck with the contest ~ Wilma

Jessica Arteaga September 13, 2010 at 7:52 PM haha, you should see this documentary called the impact man it's very interestinf on how what we don't really need and also help out the earth :D good poem n.n

James Marshall Goff September 13, 2010 at 6:51 PM am chuckling! Doc! good one! jimbo

Carolyn Devonshire September 13, 2010 at 6:43 PM Egad, I hope we never run out of toilet paper, Dr. Ram. I know things are different in other countries, but I have a friend who filled her cellar with toilet paper when we thought chaos would interrupt commerce in year 2000. (Now she can save the TP for 2012.) Very interesting poem! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn