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Savannah Autumn

Summer in Savannah Holds on to languid days for dear life She refuses to fade quietly into the dark and cold And lights up autumn days with the warm Clinging embrace of an old lover Who knows breaking up is the right thing to do But won’t.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/3/2015 11:27:00 AM
A very clever well written write. A well deserved 7., Loved it. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 10/29/2015 5:19:00 PM
Many times, I have traveled I-95 between Florida and New Jersey. I have passed close to Savannah, Georgia, but have never stayed there for any long periods of time. One of these days, I would like to stop there and take it all in. Your poem appears as an invitation to visit that nice Georgia city.
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Christi Mancha
Date: 10/30/2015 7:06:00 AM
Savannah is beautiful. Its worth staying a few days and meandering.

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