Savage Hands

They traced the boundaries
And split the minds
A savage then bellowed
Come hold my hand
Loyalties maimed
Even the gods' they cried
Grace just scattered
For the tears to dry
Will these contours
Just blur and conjoin
When hearts doth speak
Shatter thoughts so weak -- 






(c)copyright-vijay nair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 1:03 AM
very nice wording in this free verse ;}
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