Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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                                aImagination run wild..Sara

Sauntered Freely

I sauntered freely as a child
around the mountain ridge.
On Falcon's wings I flew the mile
across the placid lake to wooden bridge,
where fir laden path skirted water;
and powdered snow the ground did alter.

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Joe Maverick September 18, 2011 at 5:53 PM Yes Sara, does it for me.. (great read today)

Wilma Neels September 18, 2011 at 4:23 AM Awesome imager Sara, just love the visuals.. God bless Wilma

Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2011 at 2:35 AM On Falcon's wings I flew the mile~ a very beautiful image,,, freely is the key.. Thank you for sharing,, God bless,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich September 18, 2011 at 1:14 AM sara, if this is for john's contest, wow, you did marvelous with this one!Were you supposed to call it verse?

Constance La France September 17, 2011 at 11:00 PM This is really lovely Sara, I love it and thanks for you ever comments on my poetry~~

Audrey Haick September 17, 2011 at 4:37 PM A lovely poem, Sara. Sweet reminiscings of those days of innocence when the whole world was ours..God bless. Love, Annalise

Russell Sivey September 17, 2011 at 3:26 PM Very good write Sara! I love those descriptions and details you have in each line!! These produced great visualizations and wonderful imagery of a special time in your life! Great work!!

Nette Onclaud September 17, 2011 at 3:09 PM sara, enthralling, flowing melody with rhythmic charm! is this for a contest?? best wishes!:) huggs,nette