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Saudade

To think again of what could have been; Those painfully painless imaginative dreams of cloudless days with winds whispering love's scent through new spring clover, of walking barefoot through the glistening cool of morning dew, listening endlessly to the song of your laugh. If this is all I will have of you, I shall know no grief. Saudade Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh 02/20/2019
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Fleming Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 11:50 AM
This is good stuff, Charlie...I agree with Richard -- haunting it is! Excellent poetry. My best wishes. :) john P.s I have enjoyed my little saunter around your poems...will be returning in the very near future - cheers!
Smith Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 2:24 PM
Thank you John
Lamoureux Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 7:50 AM
This is pretty and haunting.
Smith Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 2:24 PM
Thank you Richard...
Peterson Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 12:10 AM
Your poetry sings and lifted my heart awhile this evening. Wish I could write like this.
Smith Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Mark...
Krutsinger Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 3:05 AM
Your first two lines captured my heart; the entire poem held me spellbound, actually.
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:49 AM
Thank you Caren.
Godwin Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 1:20 AM
I don't know nothin' 'bout Saudade, but I know beautiful, romantic and touching lines delivered in free verse. This made me hold my breath because awe caught in my throat. Love it. So good to visit with you! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:48 AM
Thank you CayCay...
Kendrick Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 6:25 PM
Romantic work. Enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for dropping by my page. I need to check out what a Saudade poem is..Sara
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:45 AM
Thank you Sara...
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 2:33 PM
Hello Charlie, a well said poem. have a nice day my friend.
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:45 AM
Thank you Darlene...
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Beautifully expressed my friend. There is such joy in hearing laughter. xxoo : )
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 9:18 PM
Thank you Connie...
DiMino Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 6:51 AM
Wow! Outstanding poetry. A gem for sure.
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 11:59 AM
Thank you Joe...
Michael Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 8:18 AM
Wonderful...I believe it too...Well expressed
Smith Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Thank you Arturo...
Lindley Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 5:30 AM
Superb and gloriously beautiful! I marvel at your talent in birthing this gem my dear friend. A fav....
Smith Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Thank you Robert...
Onclaud Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 2:55 PM
simply enchanting, charlie...a keeper for me!...huggs
Smith Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Thank you Nette...
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 3:22 PM
think I will fave this gem!
Smith Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Thanks again Andrea...
Callus Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 5:05 AM
Beautiful is not enough, Charlie! I love the imagery and the message within! In my eyes...a winner. Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Paul...
Duet Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 2:40 AM
Lovely and evocative of wonderful youthful feelings in days gone by that are imprinted indelibly on our hearts and minds. There are some things and some people we never forget, especially our first love.
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Thank you very much Carole...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 10:15 PM
Love painfully painless imaginative dreams. A lovely image of love embraced.
Smith Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 10:17 PM
Thank you Kim...
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Charlie, beautiful imagery and feeling of emotions my friend .. good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
Smith Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 9:22 PM
Thank you Eve...
Trifiatis Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 11:38 AM
captivating for Alpha to Omega dear, Charlie!
Smith Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Thank you Demetrios...
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 8:28 PM
oh my gosh, you did this so wonderfully. I was all stressed how to write about a portugese lover. You just wrote a simple love poem and blew it out of the water!!
Smith Avatar
February 22, 2019 at 6:51 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, you are so kind...
Sands Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Excellent! What a perfect ending too. Well written :)
Smith Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 12:48 AM
You’re wonderful Heidi, thank you...
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Reminiscing in beautiful memory..wonderful imagery in your words..the ending two lines speak volumes. Best for a win, Charlie.
Smith Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 12:46 AM
Thanks Vijay, I appreciate you so much...
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 3:17 PM
Wow, beautiful poem, Charlie. Awesome imagery. Love the scent of clover. Bravo.
Smith Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 12:45 AM
Thank you Line, you’re too kind,,,
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February 20, 2019 at 12:26 PM
- That's all we need, Charlie - Wonderful poem :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I so appreciate your encouragement...
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