Saudade

Hot as a sizzling steak on a Brazilian grill,
Dancing brown eyes I could sink my heart into
Steely arms, and determination in his eyes,
Watching me dance with a fierceness that thrills me.

My Latin lover, hero of my most erotic, exotic dreams.
Flames twirling from my skirts as I dance for him,
We are both spicy hot, breathing like spirited wild stallions
Waiting for the dancing to be over, so the loving can begin.



Contest: Saudade
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Written 2-11-2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 2/25/2019 4:10:00 PM
Bravo - hot stuff, Caren. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/24/2019 9:44:00 PM
Hot romantic poem, Caren, it is sadness soon to be abated, I can see. I enjoyed reading it.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/25/2019 6:13:00 AM
Thank you Sheri. I said to myself "it has to be sassy and sensous," and my muse laughed.
Date: 2/24/2019 2:21:00 PM
ooh, what an ending on this passionate poem. Nicely spiced, and congrats for the win!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/25/2019 6:13:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. I always enjoy meeting new words, as this was one for me.
Date: 2/24/2019 1:04:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 3nd place in the Saudade contest, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/25/2019 6:14:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine. I am always in great company in these competitions.
Date: 2/24/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thanks for taking part in my contest, Caren!:-) Congratulations on your win with this well-penned piece!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/24/2019 9:15:00 AM
Thank you for having an interesting contest, Edward. I always like a new challenge.
Date: 2/11/2019 4:46:00 PM
Wow, great visual on this one; he's someth'in!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/11/2019 6:36:00 PM
He sure is. Cannot wait to meet him in my dreams tonight.
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