Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

Saudade

Hot as a sizzling steak on a Brazilian grill,
Dancing brown eyes I could sink my heart into
Steely arms, and determination in his eyes,
Watching me dance with a fierceness that thrills me.

My Latin lover, hero of my most erotic, exotic dreams.
Flames twirling from my skirts as I dance for him,
We are both spicy hot, breathing like spirited wild stallions
Waiting for the dancing to be over, so the loving can begin.



Contest: Saudade
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Written 2-11-2019

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Line Gauthier February 25, 2019 at 4:10 PM Bravo - hot stuff, Caren. Congrats on your win.

Sheri Fresonke Harper February 24, 2019 at 9:44 PM Hot romantic poem, Caren, it is sadness soon to be abated, I can see. I enjoyed reading it. Caren Krutsinger February 25, 2019 at 6:13 AM Thank you Sheri. I said to myself "it has to be sassy and sensous," and my muse laughed.

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2019 at 2:21 PM ooh, what an ending on this passionate poem. Nicely spiced, and congrats for the win!! Caren Krutsinger February 25, 2019 at 6:13 AM Thank you Andrea. I always enjoy meeting new words, as this was one for me.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2019 at 1:04 PM - Congratulations on your 3nd place in the Saudade contest, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Caren Krutsinger February 25, 2019 at 6:14 AM Thank you Sunshine. I am always in great company in these competitions.

Edward Ibeh February 24, 2019 at 8:55 AM Thanks for taking part in my contest, Caren!:-) Congratulations on your win with this well-penned piece! Caren Krutsinger February 24, 2019 at 9:15 AM Thank you for having an interesting contest, Edward. I always like a new challenge.

M. L. Kiser February 11, 2019 at 4:46 PM Wow, great visual on this one; he's someth'in! Caren Krutsinger February 11, 2019 at 6:36 PM He sure is. Cannot wait to meet him in my dreams tonight.