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Saudade

It seemed so easy to love you- Effortless to touch such perfect Skin that I thought longed for me. In the gentleness of the night you Left and I was forsaken and Abandoned without reason. It seemed so easy for you to love me- Undemanding in every single way. In the calm of the storm you chose To leave without warning nor cause. Bestowing sorrow onto my heart with such ease. I was naive. Now I am left with the craving for You to satisfy my appetite for your kiss. Thirsty for the hope you long for me too- You know, like you used to. For I am but a lone doe lost in the Wilderness of abdicated relinquishment. My hunger is astounding as I am Hankering with nostalgia of how we Once were when we were what we were. And we were in love, my sweet. Forgive me for desiring your sweetness, Atone me for my greed for completeness. Pining over all the magnificent memories Of us walking along the shore, Hand in hand with bare feet in the sand. I aspire to embrace your eagerness- Have appetence for the faith you yearn For me to open the threshold to my Weakness- And that weakness is you, my love. I have tried so hard to surrender, Attempted with all that I am to ease This fever I call you- For your love is my forever dwelling… And I am left homesick for you. Poem titled Saudade Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Date: January 25, 2019

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Date: 2/26/2019 5:28:00 AM
'Lu Loo, Congratulations on your win. Love still burns in your longing! David'
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Date: 2/25/2019 4:31:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Lu Loo,
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Date: 2/24/2019 9:58:00 PM
Such longing for a past now lost, good Saudade, Lu Loo, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/24/2019 2:18:00 PM
Amazingly romantic and filled with longing. Congrats on the number one and thanks for my win in your contest.
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Date: 2/24/2019 12:46:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in this contest, L.L. :) - A wonderful "fever" poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2019 8:31:00 AM
Thanks for taking part in my contest, Laura!:-) A phenomenal poem! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 1/25/2019 7:27:00 AM
Memories can be so strong. Poetry cathartic, morphing those images to words. Nicely said, Luloo!
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