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Saturday Morning

I woke up in a Saturday Morning sleeping in too late. It is a little boring this is the mood I really hate. I missed all of my favorite cartoons its now 11 o'clock. Maybe I should play with my harpoon but I know I'll just be told to stop. While I'm writing this poem my brother comes up to me and says hey. Then I go to my friends home and that is what makes my Saturday. Jakob Vaught

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Date: 5/25/2013 11:26:00 AM
Hi Jakob, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/19/2013 3:30:00 PM
Jakob, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; If you like, please consider checking out my newest contest for fun : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems as of now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on certain poems, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA"
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Date: 5/19/2013 9:06:00 AM
Good one Jakob!
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