Saturday

Sit back, relax. 
Put on Jason Mraz
Hot coffee, cold weather
Lethargy clouds the air
like the dizzy smoke
from Larry's dope.
The window is The Window
to the world outside.
As is moves and slides
at its rushed and blurry pace.
It's a slow day, a day to
forget the distress 
and become fearless, 
feel quite careless.
For once.
The week has done
its worst and none
of us will hurt
the quiet, blurt
our troubles,
pout for pity. 
No, not really.
Cos it's Saturday
and that is the day
to sit back, relax
and put on Jason
Mraz.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 3/22/2010 1:31:00 PM
hey I really enjoyed this one of yours, Keabetswe! Very well written...Been a long time since I kicked back like that in a cloudy sweet smelling room but I sure did enjoy it at the time.-Robert
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Date: 3/19/2010 5:38:00 AM
Every day should be a Saturday! enjoyed by Simone
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Date: 3/3/2010 4:40:00 PM
I enjoyed reading you poetry today Keabetswe. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/3/2010 3:15:00 AM
The weekend comes, not soon enough. Nice write.
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