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the pitter-patter of a summer shower on a new metal roof

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Date: 8/14/2022 7:25:00 PM
Ha, ha! Love it! Almost as much as the smell of turpentine! Whoa! (Am I nuts, or what?!)... At any rate, that pitter-patter always reminds me of riding in a friend's authentic WW2 jeep. You felt as if it was raining bullets right on your head... Great stuff, Jeff. Super monoku! Thanks, gw
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Date: 8/9/2022 4:07:00 PM
Yes, that can be very comforting provided it doesn't leak and with a new roof it should not. LOL..Sara
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 8/9/2022 8:06:00 PM
I hope not! I put it on, so I will have nobody else to blame!

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