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Satin Winged Flowers

Satin Winged Flowers ...by Carrie Richards and Poet Destroyer _______________________________________ Let's watch how they cluster in whirlwind ballets, lifting like clouds from the dark swampy ground. Burrowed in sunlight, then full-bloomed at midnight Bouquets of white moths wings, will gather like flowers. Rising from shallows, with satin-soft petals, circling meadows in small constellations. With great expectations, they rise in their journey. Star-struck, while seeking the light of the moon. ______________________________________ 8/25/15

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Len Gasun

Date: 9/6/2015 4:10:00 AM

This is absolutely very beautiful and excellent collaboration poem of my two loving great poets here at soup! Embracing this tightly and you both! Big sweet Congratulations my very dear friend, Carrie! A super duper 7 from me. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/4/2015 10:30:00 PM

Flowers dancing, flying and sharing beauty for one and all. Superb writing and truly a gem..

Neva Romaine

Date: 9/3/2015 9:02:00 AM

Hey Carrie, congratulations on your big win in Linda's amazing contest! This is a beautiful poem and collaboration by two excellent minds. Be Blessed, Neva

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/3/2015 12:28:00 AM

Carrie, congratulations on your win. You and PD penned a good collab:-)Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 9/2/2015 11:31:00 PM

Carrie, BIG congratulations on your wonderful win! An absolutely brilliant work of art with collaboration with Linda Well done. Hugs Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/2/2015 10:58:00 PM

Congrats Carrie for a deserved big win with this very beautiful collaboration with Linda!

Skat A

Date: 9/2/2015 3:23:00 PM

Carrie, every line is beautiful... congratulations... SKAT

Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2015 3:05:00 PM

Top marks for a delightful collaboration. Well done Carrie & Linda!:) Captivated by the lovely imagery; like the satin-soft petals and their fragrance. ~ Congratulations on this high-flying win! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2015 2:36:00 PM

oh wow the flow and imagery are stunning congrats Carrie and Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2015 1:55:00 PM

Hello Carrie, weeee, this was way out of my box. However, after closing my eyes, I sat in wonder. Wondering how you find beauty in everything you write. Well after 20 minutes. I found imagery sitting on the right side of me. A beautiful rose without fragrance and life So I pictured it rising from the shadows on the outside. The rest took place, after reading and indulging in every one of your lines. Thank you for the lovely experience in collaborating with you. A JOY IT IS~~ LINDA

Carrie Richards
Date: 9/2/2015 2:45:00 PM

A big thanks to you, PD, for the wonderful placement. And may I say, I'm so blown away how quickly, and beautifully, you have been able to fulfill your collaborations on so many poems in such a brief amount of time! You should get a medal !!! Amazing task that you took on, and you met the challenge!! Thank you again!:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2015 1:55:00 PM

Carrie , Congratulations on your awesome win. I'm overwhelmed on the outcome of every poem. Stop by my latest blog "MY FELLINGS" or my newest poem "FLESH" if you'd like or have time. I'd like to post the collaboration on my poem list in the near future with your permission. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Carrie Richards
Date: 9/2/2015 3:35:00 PM

Yes.......feel free to post this on your poem list. Again, my congratulations that you were able to take on such a daunting project and write so many wonderful collabs !! I could never tackle such a huge responsibility,......but you nailed it !!