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Satin Release

Tangled in satin sheets …who sleeps? Spooning affection Lips consideration Midnight reflections Sighs interceptions Firelight crackling behind the grate Shivers, racing to the moon, escape Whispers in passion’s throw …we know Captured caressing Intimate undressing Forever addressing True love’s blessings Roses, delicate pink, release their scent Desires, intricate link, now blissfully spent Tangled in satin sheets …repeat ©Debra Squyres* 2015/01/03 Written for: “Rock me around the clock or Rock me to sleep”… member contest. Sponsored by: Sheri Fresonke Harper *Note: Not my usual kind of write as I usually steer away from sensual/intimate poetry. (Yes it still makes me blush even being over 50 yrs old and I’m not convince my Mom would approve!!!) The parameters of the contest were intriguing and I tried to center on what would rock my clock. Though it’s been a while…. I think I remembered it pretty well and hope this doesn’t offend anyone. (Are cheeks supposed to be this red??)

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Date: 2/16/2015 12:10:00 AM
Debra, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/13/2015 7:49:00 PM
It's a fantastic verse- very free form! Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2015 5:47:00 PM
a 7 congratulations on your win, Debra, my feelings is mutual being over 60. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/13/2015 4:30:00 PM
Love your poem, Debra! Lots of hot imagery! :) Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/13/2015 2:01:00 PM
ooh hot and sensual - great write many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 2/12/2015 11:41:00 PM
hey, you did a real quality job with this entry. A very well deserved win and congrats, lady!
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Date: 2/12/2015 9:10:00 PM
Debra, l loved your sexy poem, no need to blush at all, congratulations on your win.
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Debra Squyres
Date: 2/13/2015 12:44:00 PM
Thank you so much... I didn't look to place with this one!!! Over the moon !!
Date: 1/24/2015 5:13:00 PM
Hi Rosy, :), time to eat some more of those magical beans. Toooot Toooot! :) Hope you're having a wonderful weekend Debra.
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Date: 1/6/2015 7:23:00 AM
a hot write Debra that is also dignified leaving much to imagination very tasteful pen hugs
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Debra Squyres
Date: 1/6/2015 12:22:00 PM
Thank you... thank you !! I've almost removed it a few times lol
Date: 1/6/2015 12:26:00 AM
wow!!! that's some hot steamy write in a very creative way! I like how you use the word throw.. :)! your third stanza.. what a calm way to escape.. :)! to the moon... mmmmn! ..olive eloisa.. :)!
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Date: 1/5/2015 4:29:00 PM
That's why they call it the heat of passion. :) Loved the first verse. It sets the stage for a play on words. Peace. :)
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Date: 1/3/2015 10:52:00 PM
A nice poem dear poet Debra. -Safa
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