Satin Release

Tangled
in satin sheets
…who sleeps?

Spooning affection
Lips consideration
Midnight reflections
Sighs interceptions

Firelight crackling behind the grate
Shivers, racing to the moon, escape

Whispers
in passion’s throw
…we know

Captured caressing 
Intimate undressing
Forever addressing
True love’s blessings

Roses, delicate pink, release their scent
Desires, intricate link, now blissfully spent

Tangled
in satin sheets
…repeat

©Debra Squyres*
2015/01/03

 
Written for: “Rock me around the clock or Rock me to sleep”… member contest. 
Sponsored by: Sheri Fresonke Harper

*Note: Not my usual kind of write as I usually steer away from sensual/intimate poetry. 
 (Yes it still makes me blush even being over 50 yrs old and I’m not convince my Mom would approve!!!)
The parameters of the contest were intriguing and I tried to center on what would rock my clock.
Though it’s been a while…. I think I remembered it pretty well and hope this doesn’t offend anyone. 
(Are cheeks supposed to be this red??)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 16, 2015 at 12:10 AM
Debra, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
Guzzi Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 7:49 PM
It's a fantastic verse- very free form! Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love
Roper Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 5:47 PM
a 7 congratulations on your win, Debra, my feelings is mutual being over 60. Blessings Eve
Haight Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 4:30 PM
Love your poem, Debra! Lots of hot imagery! :) Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 2:01 PM
ooh hot and sensual - great write many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 11:41 PM
hey, you did a real quality job with this entry. A very well deserved win and congrats, lady!
Harper Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 9:10 PM
Debra, l loved your sexy poem, no need to blush at all, congratulations on your win.
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February 13, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Thank you so much... I didn't look to place with this one!!! Over the moon !!
Johnson Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 5:13 PM
Hi Rosy, :), time to eat some more of those magical beans. Toooot Toooot! :) Hope you're having a wonderful weekend Debra.
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 7:23 AM
a hot write Debra that is also dignified leaving much to imagination very tasteful pen hugs
Squyres Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Thank you... thank you !! I've almost removed it a few times lol
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:26 AM
wow!!! that's some hot steamy write in a very creative way! I like how you use the word throw.. :)! your third stanza.. what a calm way to escape.. :)! to the moon... mmmmn! ..olive eloisa.. :)!
Johnson Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 4:29 PM
That's why they call it the heat of passion. :) Loved the first verse. It sets the stage for a play on words. Peace. :)
Thajudeen Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 10:52 PM
A nice poem dear poet Debra. -Safa
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