Satin Gown Divorce

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Satin gown glow
Brides face shows Love; betrayal now
Satin gown glow
Sheen and luxury colors show
Exit graceful stage left I bow
In satin gown I can't frown, wow!
Satin gown glow!!
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Seraphin Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 3:18 PM
* “Thank You * For The Wonderful Cup of Mornings Joe, Yet * I Am More of A Jane Kind of Girl *.* And, I Can Envision Your Lovely Beauty In Sweet Satin * My Dear Beautiful Precious Doris * Tis Is As Dream This Beauty * Yesss, Nothing to Frown About * How Could Something Sooo Beautiful Ever Be * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 4:21 PM
I have pink laces on my sneakers Doris for breast cancer awaeness here too luv.. I think I look like a toy of some kind..haha... unless Barbie wears pink laces ..oh..happy weekend ..
A   Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Dear Doris,, so the happiness begins when the divorce takes place,, can be,,, please let me know,, a bit about this one,, it is rather interesting,,, thank you,..p.d.
Ball Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 5:54 PM
Great job here Doris. I don't thinnk anything can compare to a bride's happiness on her wedding day until she gets her first real shock of the end of the fairy tale. I think we all go into marriage expecting to live happily ever after and it's a shock when the reality of life in general hits us and we have to grow up. That's for grooms as well as brides. God Bless, JB
Sweetheart Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 8:39 PM
the glow shines and quickly fades in this stunning piece of satin gown divorce Doris.. why do luv and betrayal go hand in hand sometimes? oh if we knew before we said "I do".. brilliantly penned with great emotion..luv.. nice photo of u three at luncheon..luv..
Maverick Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 4:55 PM
Sounds like a "girl thing" (ha ha) enjoyed reading this Doris..i shall not venture more.
Wesley Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 8:16 PM
I always say, "exit as gracefully as you can" not always possible but you show it can be done. Nice one Doris.
Kearley Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 9:18 PM
Satin gown without a frown...Thats the way to do it! Nice!
Austin Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 6:11 PM
Not a bad way to go out - I guess? Love, daver
Martin Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 3:30 PM
I hope I can die as happy as this divorce! Sweet piece ma'am and thanks for stopping by "my place" earlier. Your comments on "You asked me what I'm doing" and A Letter to Elizabeth" were refreshing and uplifting. Thanks very much and I hope to read more of your lovely work in the coming days. Peace luv, Terry
Babcock Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 2:40 PM
IF your going to do it- do it in style. ha ha Nice piece. love phyl
Horne Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 1:46 PM
LOL, love this fun piece, Doris
Wesley Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 8:27 AM
Nothing like getting divorced in a satin gown Doris, the awful event might as well be done in style! Great write luv!
Sivey Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 12:05 AM
What a wonderful write Doris! Very well written! Great work!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 10:41 PM
Nicely rhymed rondelet, Doris. yes, satin is a wonderful fabric to choose,and no, I can't say as I have seen any cashmere lately!!
Kearley Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 9:28 PM
Very nice! Doris.... :-)
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Satin feels good on the skin. I'm thinking of buying satin thong undies hehe!!
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