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Satin Gown Divorce

abaabba A4-8 syllables rest Satin gown glow Brides face shows Love; betrayal now Satin gown glow Sheen and luxury colors show Exit graceful stage left I bow In satin gown I can't frown, wow! Satin gown glow!!

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Date: 11/1/2011 3:18:00 PM
* “Thank You * For The Wonderful Cup of Mornings Joe, Yet * I Am More of A Jane Kind of Girl *.* And, I Can Envision Your Lovely Beauty In Sweet Satin * My Dear Beautiful Precious Doris * Tis Is As Dream This Beauty * Yesss, Nothing to Frown About * How Could Something Sooo Beautiful Ever Be * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 10/7/2011 4:21:00 PM
I have pink laces on my sneakers Doris for breast cancer awaeness here too luv.. I think I look like a toy of some kind..haha... unless Barbie wears pink laces ..oh..happy weekend ..
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Date: 10/3/2011 11:10:00 AM
Dear Doris,, so the happiness begins when the divorce takes place,, can be,,, please let me know,, a bit about this one,, it is rather interesting,,, thank you,..p.d.
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Date: 10/2/2011 5:54:00 PM
Great job here Doris. I don't thinnk anything can compare to a bride's happiness on her wedding day until she gets her first real shock of the end of the fairy tale. I think we all go into marriage expecting to live happily ever after and it's a shock when the reality of life in general hits us and we have to grow up. That's for grooms as well as brides. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/29/2011 8:39:00 PM
the glow shines and quickly fades in this stunning piece of satin gown divorce Doris.. why do luv and betrayal go hand in hand sometimes? oh if we knew before we said "I do".. brilliantly penned with great emotion..luv.. nice photo of u three at luncheon..luv..
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Date: 9/26/2011 4:55:00 PM
Sounds like a "girl thing" (ha ha) enjoyed reading this Doris..i shall not venture more.
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Date: 9/24/2011 8:16:00 PM
I always say, "exit as gracefully as you can" not always possible but you show it can be done. Nice one Doris.
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Date: 9/19/2011 9:18:00 PM
Satin gown without a frown...Thats the way to do it! Nice!
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Date: 9/19/2011 6:11:00 PM
Not a bad way to go out - I guess? Love, daver
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Date: 9/16/2011 3:30:00 PM
I hope I can die as happy as this divorce! Sweet piece ma'am and thanks for stopping by "my place" earlier. Your comments on "You asked me what I'm doing" and A Letter to Elizabeth" were refreshing and uplifting. Thanks very much and I hope to read more of your lovely work in the coming days. Peace luv, Terry
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Date: 9/16/2011 2:40:00 PM
IF your going to do it- do it in style. ha ha Nice piece. love phyl
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:46:00 PM
LOL, love this fun piece, Doris
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Date: 9/16/2011 8:27:00 AM
Nothing like getting divorced in a satin gown Doris, the awful event might as well be done in style! Great write luv!
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Date: 9/16/2011 12:05:00 AM
What a wonderful write Doris! Very well written! Great work!!
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Date: 9/15/2011 10:41:00 PM
Nicely rhymed rondelet, Doris. yes, satin is a wonderful fabric to choose,and no, I can't say as I have seen any cashmere lately!!
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Date: 9/15/2011 9:28:00 PM
Very nice! Doris.... :-)
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Date: 9/15/2011 8:55:00 PM
Satin feels good on the skin. I'm thinking of buying satin thong undies hehe!!
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