Sated

I remember Mama's bread fresh from the oven, slathered with new churned butter, topped with grape jelly and dripping with love, greedily gulped! Inspired by Laura's "Sweet Treat" contest

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John Rhinem

Date: 3/26/2009 1:37:00 PM

Smile~Sounds like grand-mothers good old days does it not!? Actually, some of the very best cooks came from those periods along time....and good for you to recognize and pay homage to both your grand-mother; while at the same times those somewhat golden times also! Excellent recognition and write Joyce~Very lovely! Love and Warth Always To You and Yours, John!:)

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/9/2009 1:32:00 AM

Excellent Epulaeryu Joyce, best of luck in the contest...Raul

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/8/2009 12:24:00 AM

This sounds so yummy, makes me miss being a kid at home when my mama was doing the cooking. Thank you for the reminder of the good old days...LOL! Good luck in the contest and thank you for your comments as well. Smiles from Lolita

Irene Hammer

Date: 3/7/2009 5:39:00 PM

Love poems come in many forms. I'm in love with Mama's bread.

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/7/2009 4:01:00 PM

What's better than Moms home cooked meals?.........exactly! Nothing ......great job!

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/3/2009 10:28:00 PM

joyce an excellent entry - Nothing like the smell of fresh bread - Thank you for your comment - God Bless, MJ

Sandra Hudson

Date: 3/3/2009 5:05:00 PM

Great goodness, this sloppy wet vision of delectable yum! My mouth is watering!-Always Alexandra

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/3/2009 12:01:00 PM

There is nothing like fresh bread from the oven. I think it's actually my favorite food (except for chocolate). Yummy, wonderful write! Good luck! Love, Shar

Celeste Butler-Mendez

Date: 3/3/2009 7:17:00 AM

This reminds me of my Grandmother's house on Christmas day. Yummy!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/3/2009 7:03:00 AM

This would be my favorite after school snack!! Yum!~ love, Carrie

Catherine Adams

Date: 3/3/2009 7:00:00 AM

mmmmmm.... Now im hungry! Lovely Poem! ~Catherine:)