Sated

I remember Mama's bread
fresh from the oven,
slathered with new churned butter,
topped with grape jelly
and dripping with love,
greedily 
gulped!



Inspired by Laura's "Sweet Treat" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Rhinem Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 1:37 PM
Smile~Sounds like grand-mothers good old days does it not!? Actually, some of the very best cooks came from those periods along time....and good for you to recognize and pay homage to both your grand-mother; while at the same times those somewhat golden times also! Excellent recognition and write Joyce~Very lovely! Love and Warth Always To You and Yours, John!:)
Moreno Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 1:32 AM
Excellent Epulaeryu Joyce, best of luck in the contest...Raul
Townsend Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 12:24 AM
This sounds so yummy, makes me miss being a kid at home when my mama was doing the cooking. Thank you for the reminder of the good old days...LOL! Good luck in the contest and thank you for your comments as well. Smiles from Lolita
Hammer Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 5:39 PM
Love poems come in many forms. I'm in love with Mama's bread.
Lopez Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 4:01 PM
What's better than Moms home cooked meals?.........exactly! Nothing ......great job!
Jordan Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 10:28 PM
joyce an excellent entry - Nothing like the smell of fresh bread - Thank you for your comment - God Bless, MJ
Hudson Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 5:05 PM
Great goodness, this sloppy wet vision of delectable yum! My mouth is watering!-Always Alexandra
Winter Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 12:01 PM
There is nothing like fresh bread from the oven. I think it's actually my favorite food (except for chocolate). Yummy, wonderful write! Good luck! Love, Shar
Butler-Mendez Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 7:17 AM
This reminds me of my Grandmother's house on Christmas day. Yummy!
Richards Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 7:03 AM
This would be my favorite after school snack!! Yum!~ love, Carrie
Adams Avatar
March 3, 2009 at 7:00 AM
mmmmmm.... Now im hungry! Lovely Poem! ~Catherine:)
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